Street Girl

[Wright1000]

Street Girl

It looks like Chester Jeremy, who is a very shy and lonely person will never find his "special someone". So, at last he decided to hire a street girl to satisfy his sexual desires. But, he is too shy, even in front of the hooker. And, it also seems that she is hiding something. Will he able to make love to her? What is she trying to hide? Play the game to find out.

This is my first attempt at writing an erotica-type story. Hope you like it.
Though there are some sexual themes, there is no nudity, so I will not call this an "adult game".

Genre: Boy pursues Girl.
Adult Content: Sexual themes but no nudity.
Violence: None.
Age rating: 16 +

The old download link has been removed.
Here is the new download link.

[Kingv]

I'm glad you found a use for the sprite I made. I'm happy to be sharing my work with the community but I'm afraid there is a problem regarding them with your use. In my terms of use I specifically stated that the sprites I offered for download are to be used with any game PG13 or less and your project specifications are over that. So I'm afraid that I'll have to ask you to remove them from your game. I'm sorry but I'm trying not to associate certain art with more mature themes. In the future I may release more sprites aimed towards games over a teen rating but the sprite you used won't be one of them. Thank you for your cooperation on this matter.

[victorita9]

The topic might be mature but there the only details remotely sexual is kissing. The movie Pretty Women edited for TV is much more vulgar than this piece.

Due to the topic it borders on pg-13 due to it's topic, but to call it going passed that is not true. Unless holding hands is your definition of pg-13.

[Crocosquirrel]

Wright: Your choice and handling of either topic you bring up here is poor, at best. You might want to rethink.

Kingv: I'm in agreement. This piece violates both letter and spirit of the terms of use.

Victorita: Would you let your young teenaged daughter read this thing?

[Taleweaver]

Due to the topic it borders on pg-13 due to it's topic, but to call it going passed that is not true. Unless holding hands is your definition of pg-13.

Wright himself says it's ages 16 and up, and he's (w)right with that. The game's definitely more risque than what's appropriate for young teens.

[victorita9]

Wright: Your choice and handling of either topic you bring up here is poor, at best. You might want to rethink.

Haven: I'm in agreement. This piece violates both letter and spirit of the terms of use.

Victorita: Would you let your young teenaged daughter read this thing?

Teenage daughter? What about young teenage boys? Shouldn't they get the same consideration?

If the terms of using the sprites that the content could only go up to pg-13 then Motion Picture Association of America, who created and defined what PG-13 said:

"PG-13 — Parents Strongly Cautioned. Some Material May Be Inappropriate For Children Under 13. A PG-13 rating is a sterner warning by the Rating Board to parents to determine whether their children under age 13 should view the motion picture, as some material might not be suited for them. A PG-13 motion picture may go beyond the PG rating in theme, violence, nudity, sensuality, language, adult activities or other elements, but does not reach the restricted R category. The theme of the motion picture by itself will not result in a rating greater than PG-13, although depictions of activities related to a mature theme may result in a restricted rating for the motion picture. Any drug use will initially require at least a PG-13 rating. More than brief nudity will require at least a PG-13 rating, but such nudity in a PG-13 rated motion picture generally will not be sexually oriented. There may be depictions of violence in a PG-13 movie, but generally not both realistic and extreme or persistent violence. A motion picture’s single use of one of the harsher sexually-derived words, though only as an expletive, initially requires at least a PG-13 rating. More than one such expletive requires an R rating, as must even one of those words used in a sexual context. The Rating Board nevertheless may rate such a motion picture PG-13 if, based on a special vote by a two-thirds majority, the Raters feel that most American parents would believe that a PG-13 rating is appropriate because of the context or manner in which the words are used or because the use of those words in the motion picture is inconspicuous."

Now i saw no nudity, there was no details of sex or even an summary of it(unless there's another path i gone through yet). There was only a cut-off, as it is done in pg-13 movies. There was no violence shown, it was only talked about.

[PyTom]

I've elided the download link.

I'm treating Kingv as a copyright holder who's complaining about how their work is being used. Although ratings aren't precise - and I haven't been able to download the game, after trying all day - it seems likely that this work is probably in that 16+ category, by the way I rate things.

I do suggest that Kingv - and others in his or her position - take some time to clarify what is and isn't acceptable. I also hope that someone can step up and provide replacement art so that Wright can re-release his game.

[Kingv]

Sorry for not replying to everyone directly but I'm replying via my phone. I was unable to install the game myself as well after trying various times but based on the description alone it's not a project o feel completely comfortable with. I clearly stated a rating to which the sprite could be used but perhaps the original poster didn't see it. I wouldn't have a problem if my terms were followed by the creator clearly states above that its 16+. I will be sure to edit my post in the free spite section with more direct terms of use and stipulations.

I'm also a female by the way. I know my username is a little ambiguous.

[Wright1000]

It's all right, then.
I'll upload the game again with a different piece of artwork.
I'll also need to replace the screen-shot.
Well, this wasn't actually an erotica, but written in the style of an erotica. So, I thought it would be okay to use this.
But, anyway, if the creator of the artwork doesn't want her art in the game, I'll surely remove it.

[victorita9]

It's all right, then.
I'll upload the game again with a different piece of artwork.
I'll also need to replace the screen-shot.
Well, this wasn't actually an erotica, but written in the style of an erotica. So, I thought it would be okay to use this.
But, anyway, if the creator of the artwork doesn't want her art in the game, I'll surely remove it.

You are right about that it's not even erotica. Twilight would be a porno if this is erotic. Twilight has has more action sex wise and a lot more violence off screen(one of main vampire was gang raped by her fiance and left to die).

[Wright1000]

Victorita: Would you let your young teenaged daughter read this thing?

There's no need to quarrel about such a trivial matter. Since the artist doesn't want her art in the game, the link has been removed. And a new version is coming soon. End of story.

You are right about that it's not even erotica. Twilight would be a porno if this is erotic. Twilight has has more action sex wise and a lot more violence off screen(one of main vampire was gang raped by her fiance and left to die).

Even though I wrote the story like an erotica, it wasn't my objective to write one at all. What I wanted to highlight was the child abuse that is going on across the world.
Even though I didn't do a great job in highlighting it, actually, that was the topic on my mind.
If you got the second ending, then you know what I'm talking about.
Every year, thousands of girls are kidnapped and sold into prostitution. I didn't bring that into the game, but it's what motivated me to write the story.
So, if anyone is thinking that I was trying to write a "sex story", let me tell you that it wasn't my objective at all. It was written like an erotica so that people would be interested in it.

[Crocosquirrel]

Even though I wrote the story like an erotica, it wasn't my objective to write one at all. What I wanted to highlight was the child abuse that is going on across the world.
Even though I didn't do a great job in highlighting it, actually, that was the topic on my mind.
If you got the second ending, then you know what I'm talking about.
Every year, thousands of girls are kidnapped and sold into prostitution. I didn't bring that into the game, but it's what motivated me to write the story.
So, if anyone is thinking that I was trying to write a "sex story", let me tell you that it wasn't my objective at all. It was written like an erotica so that people would be interested in it.

I remind you that the OP suggests otherwise. Here's that quote--

This is my first attempt at writing an erotica-type story. Hope you like it.
Though there are some sexual themes, there is no nudity, so I will not call this an "adult game".

[Wright1000]

I remind you that the OP suggests otherwise.

Actually, to be honest, I don't understand what you are talking about.
I certainly won't tell the players what the game is about in the first post, will I?
By the way, if you have any more objections, you should bring them to pm. There's no need to start a war on this topic.

[applegirl]

I managed to download and read this before the download link went down. Actually, I kind of doubt it would be more than pg-13 (even with the subject matter). The post is a bit suggestive, but reading the actual visual novel showed very little to worry about (beyond a few words and suggestions). Nothing explicit was shown or written (and I usually rate pg-13 as the movies do, which are far, far more suggestive/explicit).

I think the description might have easily led people to believe otherwise (I was expecting a far different visual novel from the 1st post). Thinking about it even more, I can't even call this a pg-13 visual novel. If I think of two pg-13 movies this year (twilight or crazy, stupid, love), they had a far more frank depiction/suggestion of sex than this visual novel. But regardless, glad to see this taken care of peacefully.

Some thoughts in regards to the visual novel:

I managed to get 2 endings and wondered, were there more? Reading your thoughts on spreading the word about child abuse made sense to me after reading this visual novel. I thought it was suggestive in terms of her age (which I felt fairly disturbed the entire time, I imagine that was the intended effect?) The main character was very unlikable in my eyes, I wonder if that was because I expected:

to be able to save the girl. After hearing about her story, I felt very frustrated and unhappy with how her family and society was treating her. When I wasn't given the option to try to help her (beyond just saying a few nice things), I couldn't help but think the main character was pathetic.

But perhaps that was for realism? I dare say this isn't an erotica-type story (there was none in the visual novel), but I saw it more as a short glimpse of a sad practice in human life.

[Wright1000]

Thanks for your feedback.
There were only two endings in the game. I didn't add more because my goal was neither writing an adventure story, nor an erotica. But my goal was showing how cruel some humans can be. Their love for money can make other people's lives too pathetic.
Yes, I can add another route, in which the protagonist can rescue her, but then it would turn into an adventure story. So, I'm not sure about that.
And, you are absolutely right about it being not an erotica. In the main post, I wrote, it was my first attempt at writing an erotica-type story, not an erotica.
If someone downloaded the game thinking it was erotica, it would be a disappointment for them when they find out that actually it was about humanity. That's why I decided to make myself clear in the eleventh post.
There is also a lesson to learn from this story. Never judge people by their profession.
Thieves are thieves not because they want to be thieves, but because they were forced to be thieves. Suicide is a crime, and so is stealing. So, other than stealing, they have no other way. So, we call them bad names, we beat them, we throw them into the prison when they steal some money, but we can't do anything against the government who is stealing billions and billions everyday.
Same goes for a terrorist. A terrorist is a terrorist not because he wants to be one but because he was forced to be one. Maybe if someone gave him a choice, he would have become a great humanitarian.