Played this one yesterday.
The story was good and so was the artwork.
I found some typos and grammatical errors. I've listed them out for you. Hope you fix them in the final release.
Other than that, everything was nicely done. I like the combat system.
...Any lovers the woman took would be very fortunate men, even if she did not love them.
Grob finally gave up.
...Swarming around them, shouting obscenities.
I have come bearing...
...shattering it into pieces.
...Agree with this principle.
...with more respect she had ever with her before.
If what she says is true...
I also found a bug, two actually, when you decide to go to the shop in either town.
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I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "game/locations.rpy", line 36, in script call
File "game/locations.rpy", line 36, in script call
File "game/locations.rpy", line 42, in script
File "game/locations.rpy", line 42, in python
File "game/RPG Framework/inventory.rpy", line 219, in python
File "game/RPG Framework/inventory.rpy", line 283, in python
IOError: [Errno 2] No such file or directory: 'E:\\LorenRPG\\LorenRPG-all/game/vendorgrimoire.csv'
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "E:\LorenRPG\LorenRPG-all\renpy\execution.py", line 261, in run
File "E:\LorenRPG\LorenRPG-all\renpy\ast.py", line 632, in execute
File "E:\LorenRPG\LorenRPG-all\renpy\python.py", line 977, in py_exec_bytecode
File "game/locations.rpy", line 42, in <module>
File "game/RPG Framework/inventory.rpy", line 219, in __init__
File "game/RPG Framework/inventory.rpy", line 283, in parse
IOError: [Errno 2] No such file or directory: 'E:\\LorenRPG\\LorenRPG-all/game/vendorgrimoire.csv'
Windows-XP-5.1.2600-SP2
Ren'Py 6.13.8.1675
Loren The Amazon Princess 0.7