Finally got all the endings.
I'm happy to finally have more backstory on what's going on.
And of course, the more GeraldxMike makes me happy.
Hurrah for Gerald holding Mike with sparkly background. And Gerald plays the violin. So basically, Gerald is awesome like always. I did find the bonus where you talked about the different personalities of Gerald interesting.
But, here's a problem I noticed. Some of Grace's narration, particularly at the beginning doesn't exactly feel like it matches with the rest of the story. Reading it, it sounds a lot like she doesn't know what's going on, but she should know since she's already dead. The way she and Frank act at the beginning, it really seems like either they don't know the truth, or they're putting on a act. But why would they be putting on an act? Mike and Gerald haven't entered the mansion yet, and everyone else in the mansion is already onto the secret. They're just putting on an act for the audience, which is a bit odd as I'm fairly sure that they aren't aware of the player.
I'm not going to hold this against the game too much, especially since its a NaNoRenO game, but I thought it may be something to look out for in the future.