I can point out a couple.janrrah18 wrote: and if there are any tips i can get better....
1. His hood looks like a bonnet because you haven't given his hair any shadow at the point of contact. You also might want to observe the physics of real hoods. (Put on a hoodie! lol) They don't widen at the sides; they usually either go down straight against the head if they are small and being stretched, or sag near the shoulders if they are larger.
2. When making flames, instead of drawing them on a white background first, you lay down the base color (black) and then paint over it so you eliminate that nasty blurry white edge effect.
3. To get correct anatomy, even if you are drawing a close-up, sometimes it's best to draw more of the picture and then crop. Right now, his shoulders seem a little wide, and his neck is rather short and thin comparatively. With the collarbone lines you drew, his shoulders should be a lot smaller than they currently are. (Of course, his head would be enormous then.)
4. You should give him some white in his eye.