MY teacher

[Enerccio]

Got functional demo.
DOWNLOAD LINK: http://rapidshare.com/files/4964812/My_teacher.zip.html (around 22 megs)
(all versions)

Please post any comments.

[Enerccio]

UPDATED DEMO TO VER 0.2 - http://rapidshare.com/files/4974923/My_ ... o.zip.html
(only windowsxp)

[musical74]

This is based on the original demo so my main complaint may have been fixed, but here's the pros and cons of the original demo!

PROS: I like the scene - a LOT. I think it's great that MOM says "you are getting a tutor" and you get all these ideas of some guy living with you...and then find out it's a pretty girl The graphics are well done and the choices are made sense, and I think I will look forwards to seeing the final release, based on the demo! The music is good, nothing fancy.

CONS: One major one...SPELLING. There are a LOT of spelling mistakes in the first demo. *Wos* should be *was*, "learnnig" should be *learning*, "carcrash"is missing a space...take away the spelling errors, it's a good game

I'll DL the updated version and see if the spelling errors are fixed...and if there are other things that have been updated I'll let you know about them as well

[Enerccio]

NEW version 0.26
- corrected mistakes
- new outro music finally worked (i must deleted renpy and unzip new one... )
DOWNLOAD (xp only): http://rapidshare.com/files/4994746/My_ ... 6.zip.html

[mikey]

I have to say this one is really just like the typical bishoujo game, a light story, funny moments and an ecchi-ish protagonist. It starts off really nicely, and there's no shortage of visuals - let's hope they or the motivation doesn't run out.

Several typos, but the ones that stung the most were probably:
wos >> was
party time job >> part time job
Also, Yumi doesn't really fit into the pictures because she is full-body.

It's a good job so far, keep it in this spirit and we have a good stereotypical game on our hands.

[Enerccio]

I have to say this one is really just like the typical bishoujo game, a light story, funny moments and an ecchi-ish protagonist. It starts off really nicely, and there's no shortage of visuals - let's hope they or the motivation doesn't run out.

Several typos, but the ones that stung the most were probably:
wos >> was
party time job >> part time job
Also, Yumi doesn't really fit into the pictures because she is full-body.

It's a good job so far, keep it in this spirit and we have a good stereotypical game on our hands.

Thank you, thank you

Also, Yumi doesn't really fit into the pictures because she is full-body. - njn som ta nepochopil akoze nesedi yumi lebo ma plne telo? Iny obrazok zailbohu aj tak nezozeniem... (teda ak som to pochopil spravne).

What do you think of music?

[mikey]

Hmmm, I played without music Next time.

[DaFool]

I liked this, it was put together well. The premise, the pacing, the choice of graphics, the in-game music too. But you might want help from an editor or else write in a language you're comfortable in, then translate.

[Enerccio]

New demo released, visit http://www.bishojo.tk/