And I dared say that I remembered her... calling her Naomi XD...
"I wanted the reader to be in a freaking atmosphere at first, because it is a link to the weird first experience the hero encounters. Its objective was clearly to exagerate the Biocheck session, making it dramatic, if not laughable."
Well, it might be just me but I was *really* wondering wether all this was normal or if some shady people were actually going to subdue him o_o. I kept wondering "is this exageration or actually happening?".
And I dared say that I remembered her... calling her Naomi XD...
Hehe lack of coffee?
<<Well, it might be just me but I was *really* wondering whether all this was normal or if some shady people were actually going to subdue him o_o. I kept wondering "is this exageration or actually happening?">>
That's exactly what I wanted to do. I'm glad you had exactly this reaction because I wanted the reader to think about it, doubt if the scene was real or not. I might have put a more strong response after the fake end screen but actually I ended in a more comical way.
Latest news:
Included another character: Haruka.
Originally appears in the second chapter but decided to bound her to the hero.
Composed 2 songs for the game (Anyone wanna sing? :p), one for the opening, the other one as an in-game music.
As for the CGs, most of them are still in their "concept art" state (i.e. not colorized, still not scanned, on paper).
Need help!
I'm shifting the scenario and don't really need someone for the writing process, but I definitively need an experienced colorist/BG artist.
I also need a proofreader since most of my english sentences are weird.
I also need someone who'd volunteer to slap my back from trying to translate games rather than finishing mine XD
About a singer:
Well I was serious about a singer, but I don't have yet the lyrics. If anyone's interested in writing them, I could send the tune with melody and karaoke version, but don't expect some real instrument performance, I don't have the studio for that. Ah, and I prefer a female voice (sorry guys) because it fits the song.
About the proofreading:
When I mean my sentences are weird, it's because of some grammatical errors that I make because my mother tongue isn't english. That's why it sounds weird to an english native.
I want the text to have a good flow (a fitting with the atmosphere) and an accurate vocabulary (when needed) so that it doesn't sound like inhuman text blocks with no feelings.
Singing? Possibly...I'm a mezzo-soprano to a contralto... but it is possible for me to get to a soprano if warm up first. Being a good singer? Well that's a different story! ^_^
But I am female and I can sing if you need me to! I have been casted in a few singing spots so I have experience. But I'm sure that there are people better than me, so yeah.
Proofreading? I have a high school standard? Although, again, MUCH more qualified people in that field!
I'm a baritone-bass, and love to sing so.... =)