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#4291 Post by MonoPiero »

random sketch lolol
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#4292 Post by Mink »

I dunno, should Derek look like this is C!P's remake?
Adult-ish. I think he still looks more like he's in his teens. Maybe I should make his face longer...
Adult-ish. I think he still looks more like he's in his teens. Maybe I should make his face longer...
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Yes, he clearly has no ears on the sides of his head, because if he did what sense would that even make?
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#4293 Post by Sapphi »

Mink wrote:I dunno, should Derek look like this is C!P's remake?
I think I would move the (viewer's) right eye a little bit more towards the edge of the face, angle the bridge of his nose to match the angle of the face, and maybe lengthen his nose more overall and tone down the turned-upness just a bit. Turned-up noses are usually a visual shortcut for youth.
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#4294 Post by Mink »

^Thanks for that. 8D And now, second and third attempts.
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Bleh...I still think his nose looks kind of off, but it seems to look a bit better overall.

Also, in the sequel that's happening eventually...I will find some way for Derek to look like an adult while making sense in context.
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#4295 Post by FragmentedBergyo »

Oh, oh! Can someone gimme one of those "draw yourself in XX style" wuggestions? Sounds like fun >:D

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#4296 Post by Deji »

FragmentedBergyo wrote:Oh, oh! Can someone gimme one of those "draw yourself in XX style" wuggestions? Sounds like fun >:D
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#4297 Post by Explosions&NickCage »

FragmentedBergyo wrote:Oh, oh! Can someone gimme one of those "draw yourself in XX style" wuggestions? Sounds like fun >:D
Old Scooby-Doo Hanna-Barbera style.

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#4298 Post by miaverana »

--------- Art from my cousin, which was suggested to be deleted by her ;____; -----------
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#4299 Post by Deji »

miaverana wrote:A gift for one of the member in my team because she's bored :3. (I'm really worry about my new style >.<).
That's really cute! :D
I wish I could draw so clean ;_;

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#4300 Post by FragmentedBergyo »

Alright! Both challenges accepted.
It'll have to wait till I get back from my one-week trip to Germany though.

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#4301 Post by Shalambay Shift »

It's hard to draw adults... does she look like 21?
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There's so much things wrong about her... like her eyes, hands, arms, (this list could go on...)
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#4302 Post by Pyonkotchi »

i hope you dont mind me redlining it :;3;
I tried to make her look older and fiddled with the anatomy
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first thing I did was shrunk her head and eyes. Big heads and eyes are baby-like features. so that made her look a lot younger than you probably intended.
when I did that her shoulders and forehead were a bit big so i messed with that bit and cut and pasted
then i did a redline,
added some lady curves and yeah

i didn't hardly do anythign to the hands because how do i hands???
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#4303 Post by Shalambay Shift »

@Pyonkotchi Thanks so much! You're very helpful~ :D
(Good thing I didn't do the lineart yet :p I don't think I'm going to do it anyway)

EDIT : Sorry for mispelling your name TT_TT
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#4304 Post by khnachi »

practicing character design..
and I'm starting to become unoriginal at it too.. :shock:
oh,well....gonna practice more then :mrgreen: :mrgreen:
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#4305 Post by miaverana »

Deji wrote:
miaverana wrote:A gift for one of the member in my team because she's bored :3. (I'm really worry about my new style >.<).
That's really cute! :D
I wish I could draw so clean ;_;

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I just doodled myself and my pets (that unfortunately don't get to live with me ;_;)
Thank you :3. And what a cute doodle you have >u<.

Finished the sketch to test my new drawing style. (So messy -_-).
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