It's not that it's an infodump as much as it maybe doesn't represent what the game will focus more on?AsagiMete wrote: I was worried that nobody liked the plot. Is it really an info dump? It's just plot, setting, and characters. That's what the sticky wanted, right?
You yourself said...
But if you reread your plot synopsis, you'll notice the slice of life doesn't really come across.The Edge of Magic is roughly 70% slice of life, 25% international intrigue, 5% epic battle against "evil"
Hey, please don't take it the wrong way, I don't mean it's uninteresting, I mean it's impersonal.
Maybe framing it more like it's about the characters...?
Like, Lunin's struggles between his faith, his passion for research, and being wrapped in politics unkown to him...
Tell us about the very first thing we should feel, about the feeling you want us to get from this game.
Then, tell us all about the setting in the uh..."setting" description.
I'm absolutely not trying to pick on you or anything. I'm commenting on this because I do find it interesting.
And the art! The art is lovely! (everybody's eyes are so shiny, they have such distinctive poses and expressions ^^)
I really like the bg you just posted too. I think this game is looking extremely good, and I would definitely give the demo a chance.
Just felt like telling you my opinion, but of course, it's just one person's opinion, so don't take it too seriously.
Good luck with the project!