phoenixhymn wrote:...this sounds like a lot of fun. I like these kind of something-traumatic-happened-in-childhood mysteries.
Sounds like a fun premise, especially since it seems as if healing is going to be a major theme for the story.
I don't have enough confidence in myself as a script/visual novel writer (going to start my very first script this year!) to volunteer for someone else, sorry.
(Proofreading is the only thing I'd be confident in doing for other people.) I hope you can find a co-writer and an artist. Best of luck!
Hello, Phoenixhymn. I'm glad you think the plot it interesting. Yeah: healing is basically one of the main themes for the story.
I'll be sure to let you know if I need proofreading later in the development. Thank you for your words
Ran08 wrote:Oh, this sounds great. I love the idea. I think it would make a good story.
The characters are intriguing. I like the fact that there are two sides to all of them. They seem to work out well.
The plot is quite typical, but what makes it special is how you can add something that can make it unique. Well, in this case, they're the characters.
I'll be looking forward to this! I really wish to help out, but when it comes to "sad" stories, I tend to be a tad too dramatic. XD
If you need testers though, or someone who can help with the story, I'll be glad to do whatever I can for you.
Goodluck!
Hello, Ran. Thank you for your interest. Yeah, the plot is the typical one, but as you said, the characters are what make it special.
I made sure to make them all have some kind of weakness, because, well, in reality no one's perfect either.
That fact is a really important one in the story and I'm glad you noticed it.
If you are willing to help me out with the story, PM me and we'll talk about it; I'm sure you could be of help
Thank you!
inhalance wrote:This story sounds interesting! I think it will turn out great.
I'm in need of a "sad" story right now anyways, heh OTL
I hope you'll be able to recruit more team members and to finish the game.
If you need a proofreader (since I'm currently unavailable for the co-writing position, but if I wasn't I would definitely be up to do it!),
just PM me any time and I'll gladly offer my services. Good luck!
Hello, Inhalance. I'm already trying to recruit member and hope I'll have an artist soon enough. I'll make sure I PM you
when I need some proofreading. Thank you for your kind words.
Replies aside, I can't believe I actually forgot to put one character summary here. But it is now on the first post. She is not a love interest,
since there's no GxG, sorry.
But she plays a important role on the plot. I'll be updating soon!