Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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#5056 Post by Zylinder » Wed Feb 06, 2013 9:34 am

About 45 mins' worth of color studies since it's one of my weakest areas.

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#5057 Post by AshenhartKrie » Wed Feb 06, 2013 6:36 pm

I love your sceneries. They're always so stunning.
Have some Eridan.
Becuase Homestuck.
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#5058 Post by 9-of-Hearts » Fri Feb 08, 2013 3:59 am

This was what I was doing the last two hours.... instead of homework or sleeping. ^^;;
Playing around with making a gif.
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Also, thanks, Susan--I really appreciated your compliment from before, but didn't want to make an artless post ^^ <3 So yeah, thanks!

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#5059 Post by xavimat » Fri Feb 08, 2013 4:40 am

Wow, zylinder, I like your BG.
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#5060 Post by Auro-Cyanide » Fri Feb 08, 2013 8:53 am

Working on a new concept for Swan Grimoire tonight.

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#5061 Post by Pinlin » Fri Feb 08, 2013 10:12 am

I have different styles of drawing (though I draw anime mostly xD)
Here a badazz shinigami:
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Then after I draw cute chibis:
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I like both styles *o* sometimes I cannot believe that I drew both pictures lol~ different artstyles...
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#5062 Post by Lumen_Astrum » Fri Feb 08, 2013 12:21 pm

A painting I finished long ago that I only got to post now.

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My anatomy is as disfigured as it can be but at least it's fine. First time printing lineart for watercolor. It's awesome (o v o )b

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#5063 Post by dp4 » Fri Feb 08, 2013 3:44 pm

This is my first post. I just started learning Ren'Py yesterday and I'm really excited to produce my first short story.

For my first game, I'm using an art style that I consider derivative of: Popolocrois, Wind Waker, Threads of Fate, and Lost Winds. I'd like to do a fantasy story that will appeal about equally to females and male players.

I'm creating my character artwork with Inkscape and Illustrator (depending on which system I'm on at the time).

I'm attaching my "mad" hero character, named Ix.
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#5064 Post by HumbertTheHorse » Fri Feb 08, 2013 4:45 pm

Great 1st post dp4. Your mad hero has great style and I love those block shoes :)

I'm dumping this girl because her ugly dead hands are so 2012. I think the time has come for me. Tomorrow I begin work on my very own VN - muhaha!
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#5065 Post by xavimat » Fri Feb 08, 2013 5:20 pm

dp4 wrote:I'm attaching my "mad" hero character, named Ix.
I like that, dp4; impressive hammer!
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#5066 Post by dp4 » Fri Feb 08, 2013 6:14 pm

xavimat wrote:
dp4 wrote:I'm attaching my "mad" hero character, named Ix.
I like that, dp4; impressive hammer!
Thank you! I'm happy to have a community like this to support my endeavor. Hope I can help others as well.

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#5067 Post by Auro-Cyanide » Fri Feb 08, 2013 10:22 pm

@dp4, He looks great! And I applaud you for working with vectors. I can't illustrate with them, I'm waaaaay to impatient for the pen tool XD

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#5068 Post by Carrogath » Fri Feb 08, 2013 11:09 pm

Some guy with an eye patch! I wish I could say he was a character of mine, but I just randomly doodled him. Maybe I'll make him a CC sprite or something...
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#5069 Post by Applegate » Sat Feb 09, 2013 2:06 pm

I would reaaaaally appreciate some redlining here. Trying to draw more busts to get better at it (and then move on to full bodies!) but I just can't find any way to appreciate the anatomy in this... And I'm sure you guys are a little better at that than I am!

Halp pls. :(
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#5070 Post by dp4 » Sat Feb 09, 2013 4:10 pm

Applegate wrote:I would reaaaaally appreciate some redlining here.
@Applegate I think you're doing a good job!

I have these three suggestions:

1. Horizontal-flip every few minutes while you're drawing, so you can spot errors you would not otherwise see. Usually, if you can look at the art flipped horizontally and see no errors, it's ready!
2. I think the collar you were drawing caused you to accidentally elongate his neck a bit much. But that could also be a style you're doing.
3. I think including simple hands is a good idea because they're good practice, but also because they can really be expressive.

I'm attaching a redline, as requested.

If you would like more help from me, feel free to message me! I don't want to start having a back-and-forth about art process on this thread, but I would be happy to help you more.
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