Crop Circle [Sci-fi][Drama][2013][BxG]

[try10]

I love the sketches. The dog looks very cute. I can't want to see them colored.

[klonki]

Azure, you definitely won me over with just the word "alien" lol!
I'm still a little bitter that I couldn't participate in NaNo this year with my alien idea, so I'm so happy to see someone chose to do a story about aliens! ;A;

The dog is really adorable! What kind of breed is it? I also like the way you approached Maya! She looks very refreshing, and even with her scars, I think she's beautiful. And she's good with animals too, so that's a plus!

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Statistics:

The game contains 1,248 screens of dialogue.
These screens contain a total of 13,048 words,
for an average of 10.5 words per screen.
The game contains 7 menus.

Even now, I'm still so astounded at how fast you type your script! Teach me your ways! /sob You're really a natural born writer. xD

Knowing you, I have no doubts you'll finish this on time, so I'm looking forward to see it released! :')

[Kokoro Hane]

Squee~ You work fast, and lovin' the sketches!

You're already up in the 13 thousands with words? Nice! I'm at that level, too, with mine ^o^

[azureXtwilight]

Azure, you definitely won me over with just the word "alien" lol!
I'm still a little bitter that I couldn't participate in NaNo this year with my alien idea, so I'm so happy to see someone chose to do a story about aliens! ;A;

The dog is really adorable! What kind of breed is it? I also like the way you approached Maya! She looks very refreshing, and even with her scars, I think she's beautiful. And she's good with animals too, so that's a plus!

Thank you! I am glad you're interested! I've been wanting to make something about aliens after all~
Harold is a golden-retriever :3 I originally wanted to make him a german sheperd but then my brother suggested a goldie instead. And I'm glad you like Maya!

Squee~ You work fast, and lovin' the sketches!

You're already up in the 13 thousands with words? Nice! I'm at that level, too, with mine ^o^

Thanks!

The main story is done, people! I've sent it over to be proofreaded/edited so it might be longer... I'm still open to the proofreaders' suggestion

Here's my current word count.

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Statistics:

The game contains 2,056 screens of dialogue.
These screens contain a total of 21,665 words,
for an average of 10.5 words per screen.
The game contains 9 menus.

Now I'll be working on the sprites! Be prepared for art updates, people!

[azureXtwilight]

And here's the complete Leonard sprite!

[azureXtwilight]

I'm very sorry to say this might not see the deadline, but I'm still going to finish it. Currently, I am facing a real-life issue about bullying (you might have seen my DA) but I'm going to get this done with a better quality.

[nancie]

I'm very sorry to say this might not see the deadline, but I'm still going to finish it.

I don't know whats going on out there but here you know we all love you, and your fans will support you no matter when you finish it.
I truly hope you are able to get the rest of it figured out, but until then don't stress about silly things like hobby project deadlines.
**Big Hugs**

[The Monkey Ninja]

Alien inclusion! Ho HO!
ALIENS I SAY *SHAKES SCREEN*

It looks like it will be very interesting *___* And with your track record and games, no doubt fantastic as well. Will be an interesting change to play from a male's perspective in a visual novel (I usually avoid the BxG types because of the high 'show us some boobs' and 'fanservice galore' ratios in them >> But I'm sure this one won't do that---- if it does, well. I shall be entertained. XD)
THIS:

Orion

A loner, calm, and quite angsty. His last words to his father was "I hate you!" before coming to the village and got struck in an incident. He feels like he's currently living an empty life.

...I expect dramatics and for myself to giggle madly + laugh hysterically if he pulls the drama-comedy emo scene a few times XD *loves that* Best example I suppose would be when Tamaki (from Ouran High School Host Club) had to play a popular prince-like character with a dark past and 'deep' side ((I can't remember the episode, but he clutched at his body in the rain and said words that made me giggle as was intended XD Rengei (((however its spelt))) was directing it or something)).
If its serious angst though then I'm expecting this boy to be a hard shell to crack or at least some very heart-wrenching, or even just GASP moments.

...and I do expect GASP.

As for others---- MAYA WHAT HAPPENED?! She's still incredibly beautiful even with the scars. I can only wonder what caused them... Its not common to see a main female character as physically damaged as her, so its a fresh piece added to this game, along with the alien thing of course.

Leonard is--- LEON OMFG LE-- *HAVING A MOMENT PLEASE* *flashing back to Fantasia* *...breathes* ...Okay. I've calmed down. *AHEM* SIMPLY BECAUSE HE DOES NOT BELIEVE IN IT, DOESN'T MEAN HE ISN'T INVOLVED. (...wait) He could be under cover...-shot-

And that dog. If he really does get a sprite, even just the face (as he seems to be getting) I will love you forever, LOL. Animals hardly show up in games, and even if they do its rare that they get sprites XD (I was so excited to see the cat sprite in Under The Moon *only played demo* *...adult...game ahem*). SHOW THE DOGGEH SOME LOVE. *cheers*

As for new colouring style--- I think it will suit the game. Its wispy, chiarascuro (yes I misspelt that but its close enough XD) -like, and adds a sense of...mystery to the art. Which I find excellent for this game, what with its alien setting.

OVERALL -- I'm looking forward to this. It seems promising, and again based on the past, I know it will be.

[Coren]

*CHU HERE*

Just finished reading and decided to hack into my brother's Lemma account to say that I really had fun with this! I'll be voicing Maya, so I'm really excited about it. She's a very nice character - and so is everyone else!

[shanie019]

-casuallystalksthisonetooheeeheee-

[tiya_nofurita]

How's progress on this one ?