Critique? Hmm...I think the right lens is smaller then the left. It's perspective, I know, but something looks odd. Might be just the flare on the glasses that's throwing me off.*shrug* And I think she needs an ear. Like the hair.
Volunteer CG artist, if your story interests me (which is very likely!).
PM me if you want me on your team! Current Project: None
How do you make your games? I see. Thank you for the prompt replies, but it is my considered opinion that you're doing it wrong inefficiently because I am a perfushenal professional. Do it my way this way and we can all ascend VN Nirvana together while allowing me to stroke my ego you will improve much faster. Also, please don't forget to thank me for this constructive critique or I will cry and bore you to death respond appropriately with a tl;drrant discourse of epic adequately lengthy proportions. - Sarcasm Veiled in Euphemism: Secrets of Forum Civility by lordcloudx (Coming soon to an online ebook near you.)
Hey, that's really cute, umm... Some Long Haired Guy. ^^; Is that a screenshot of a future visual novel? I wish it would be, 'cause it looks really nice, both character art and the background.
How do you make your games? I see. Thank you for the prompt replies, but it is my considered opinion that you're doing it wrong inefficiently because I am a perfushenal professional. Do it my way this way and we can all ascend VN Nirvana together while allowing me to stroke my ego you will improve much faster. Also, please don't forget to thank me for this constructive critique or I will cry and bore you to death respond appropriately with a tl;drrant discourse of epic adequately lengthy proportions. - Sarcasm Veiled in Euphemism: Secrets of Forum Civility by lordcloudx (Coming soon to an online ebook near you.)
A bit urgent (I know you're reading this) since a friend currently is using my laptop and Serysia Story is in it and I'm currently glued to my seat in front of my drawing board (with enough food supply to last for 2 more days)... could you send me a copy serysia story again?... preferably rapidshare... bye!
For some odd reason I can't remember my password but I'm too embarased to tell everyone... (I'm my laptop all I have to do is log in and use Opera's Magic Wand and I'm instantly logged in...)
I guess I'll have to wait till I get my laptop so I can log in properly.