Bloody Kiss [GxB] (Update CGs)

[Harusha]

Hi every one ^^.
This is my first time making a game with Ren'Py program. I hope you could help me with the basic feature.
Thank you very much

I'm not sure about the game name much, if you have any idea please tell me.

Here's a little update for the main screen:

This game is about a wonder world with many races:
+Human
+Witches, wizards
+Demon
+Vampires

The main character is a human girl name Stirina:

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She's 18 years old.
The story begin when she dreams about a strange boy- a demon name Zaras:


And 5 more boys:
I've just draw 3 among of them.

First is Zaras:

Second is Kaster:

Third is Lair:

I'm drawing the other two.

But now i have troubles with CGs
Can you teach me anyway to make beautiful CGs?

Hope you could help me.
Thank you very much.







(Update)!!!!!!

I've drawn some new CGs for my game, but I haven't colored it ( I can't color it beautifully)
From this ones, I used a program named "Manga Studio" to draw, it makes beautiful curves, recommend on it

If you are free, can you help me? ^^

Kaster - one of the character in this game know how to use the Tarrot card, so I draw some pic fit with it.
Here it is:

The Death:

The High priestess:

The Fool:

And some other CGs:

Hope you like it !! ^^


I really want to hear your comment about these .
If it not good, just say so, that the way how I can improve my art ^^.

BONUS: (This one I draw for fun ^^)

***Progress:
+Story: 85%
+Scripting: 10%
+Sprites: 95%
+CGs: 50%
+Music:0%

[Hadex]

Hi. I like your characters they really don't look bad. Even my characters for the game I'm making don't look like that. I'd like to say though it would be best if you knew more about the game you want to make. An example: your characters (including the para's) are a group of hunters looking for a large group of evil wizards or vampires. Even if they are the same race that their hunting they could be doing it for good as in saving the world . Of course though you could add some type of romance between the characters such as a love triangle within the group of hunters. Making the story more interesting to readers making them wonder who the girl would go to; depending on the path they choose to go.

[merdeamour]

Hm. Maybe you could tell us more about the plot? Also, your sprites look like they have the same faces, with the only thing distinguishing them being their eyes/hair/clothes.

I don't have experience with CGs, though, as I'm not much of an artist in that respect, so I'm afraid I can't help you there...

Anyway, good luck with this! (: Hope you can flesh this story out a bit more and post more here so we can know more about it.

[Harusha]

>< Thanks for your comments.

Actually, this is the first time I draw character with MS Paint, so it's hard for me to draw different character (I'm still trying my best ^^)

Hadex, I love your idea, maybe i would put it in the next project (If i could do one more >////<)

Um, detail about the story is:

Stirina- a human girl usually dreams about a boy with silver hair-Zaras. But the strange thing is he keep calling her "Meilisa". he is actually a demon - Meilisa's lover, but they couldn't come together because of something.
During the time before Stirina could figure "who is Meilisa" she meets:

+Lair - a student of her father (Her father is historical professor.) He seem friendly but everything changes when he hears the name "Meilisa". To Lair, Meilisa is a powerful witch who destroy his village 200 years ago - the one he want to get revenge. How can he live 200 years?!!! That's a secret. ^^

+Second is Kaster - the boy who has possibility of seeing the future (But this power is unstable ><). Stirina wonder why he care so much about her without knowing her and he smiles whenever hearing "Meilisa"

+Styx- mysterious boy, hard to talk with (Stirina did try hard to make friend with him). And he has magic even though he isn't a wizard.

+When it come to wizard, we have Rozveil - the "most handsome and talented wizard in the world" -that's what he call himself X(
He is really confident with his appearance but Stirina is the first girl to ignore him (Yay, Strina!!)

+Yrkos, a strange vampire recently appear at the midnight. He has a curse cast by Eileen-the witch-younger sister of Rosveil. And he need Stirina blood to cure the curse.

* Eileen here is the evil character. She suddenly curse Stirina's family when she sees her (under the introdution of Rozveil)
All of them comes by herside because of the name "Meilisa".
She has to find out the truth who is Meilisa and give every one their freedoms.
So that's how the adventure begin

[Harusha]

Ah, i've just finish Yrkos - the vampire's expression. Here you are ^^:

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[Harusha]

This is Styx:

He's the most mysterious character in this game.
Styx has magical power, but no one know what is that magic.
Base on his appearance, Styx is about 17-19 years old.
Personality: Quiet, like to work alone...
Kind of girl he likes: No information.

[Harusha]

Finally finish Yrkos clothes ^^:

[Harusha]

Hi, everyone.
I need you help today.^^
I confuse about Eileen (The witch) hairstyle.
Which one do you prefer between these?
Need your help desperately ><

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or

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Info:
Eileen is a powerful witch, who has lived for decades!
Also the one who put the curse on Yrkos.
She hate Meilisa for some reason.
Rozveil is her big brother.

[ItsAzilo]

i like the first hairstyle, but if the character is supposed to be older i think the second one would work better. btw i think your sprites look really good for being made in paint!

[Ran08]

I think it's interesting. ^^ The boys are cute too. Mehehe.

However, I have the same comment as the merdeamour.
The first three boys look exactly the same. It's kinda easy to fix that though. Maybe just change their hairstyles and expressions and they'll be fine. ^^ The last two have distinct faces, so that's good.

I think the vampire dude is cool. Wahahaha. And Eileen is beautiful! I like the first one better, albeit without the rose.

Well, goodluck with this! ^^ I think it's pretty interesting. If you need a proofreader or something, I'd be happy to help! ^^

(Oh, and, I wonder what's the planned length for this story? )

[Harusha]

Thank you very much for your opinion ^^
You don't know how much happy am I to see your reply ^////^
The length of the game, I suppose more than half hour, may be one hour? >////<
It'll be decided when I completely done with the script
So the first Hair style have more recommend now.
I will wait for a little bit more to make sure ^^
Thank you very much.

[Ran08]

No problem. ^^
Ahh, the length is good enough. Haha. Not too short, but not super long. Although of course, it depends on the story too. Even if the length is 4 hours, if the story is very good I still won't be satisfied! Hahahaha.
Haha, yeaaaah, we like the first one better. Teehee.
You're welcome. ^^

Again, good luck on this! Looking forward to see more progress.

[Harusha]

This is the curse happen to Yrkos:

Yrkos under the curse.
Physical age: 12 years old.
His power is weakest whenever it come to the night.

Info:
Yrkos is vampire who has lived for hundred years.
300 years ago, he made a mistake and the result is: Eileen put a curse on him "Turning into a child every night."
When Yrkos meets Stirina, he knows her blood will cure his curse.
Why?
You'll know the detail when i finish this game ^^

[Harusha]

Screen shots:

[merdeamour]

Wow, screenshots already? Cool!
And those expressions you added are pretty good... (cause, like, I said that they all looked alike, but now the expressions added individuality to them). That last screenshot made me grin ((: You're an amazing artist to be making this in Paint!