Rei (GxB) (supernatural high school romance)

[Dawnfire]

This was a GREEEEEAT short game! Amazing art, amazing writing, and a story that really touched me. The tragic ending was a stab to the heart, but in the best possible way. Of course there are minor flaws in some character development, but with your time constraints, I think you really did an excellent job. I loved every minute of this and I can't wait for more projects in the future.

[sonnet009]

Dawnfire:

Thank you so much. :) I enjoyed the challenge of making a game in such a short time, but it's a shame that it meant the character development had to be so tightly rationed. In future, I won't have the excuse of not enough time, so I'd better do a good job!

[Tiranoua]

Downloaded and playing this, I thought it was amazing and had beautiful artwork and story to match

[Nutella_Sandwhich]

When I finished downloading this, I extracted the file and my Antivirus detected a malicious file which is a Trojan virus. It came from the file. So I had to delete it

I don't know why the others who played it didn't get a virus but I did.

I hope this won't happen again

[sonnet009]

Tiranoua:

Thank you! I'm glad you liked the story, and I agree about the artwork -- the artists are very talented.

Nutella_Sandwhich:

Well, obviously this is very concerning! You are the first person to report a virus. I checked the files thoroughly before putting them up for download, so this is a real shock to me. I am currently running a billion tests on my end. In the meantime, could you please let me know if you downloaded the file direct or through Mediafire?

Also, if anyone else out there has found the same thing but not reported it, please let me know...

EDIT: Okay, having finished the billion tests, I haven't found anything wrong with the files. Nor with anything else on the computer they came from. So I have a few questions:

Where did you download Rei from?
What scanning software do you use that said there was a trojan in the game files?
Which file, specifically, was said to be infected?
Do you have any information on the trojan? Name? Serial number?

[Nutella_Sandwhich]

I will try to download it again and see if my antivirus will detect something. (hopefully not)

I really want to play this game because it looks so interesting for me.

[sonnet009]

Nutella_Sandwhich:

Please let me know what happens this time. Thank you!

EDIT: Thanks for responding to me here and through PM. I agree that it must have been a false positive from your antivirus software. I have checked and re-checked that the game files are safe and am confident that there is nothing harmful in there. Phew!

[Puchin]

Downloading!

[NanaNaninna]

Beautiful! I loved it!

The story was so original and interesting, the characters had such great personality! I was surprised how the protagonist was not the usual silly-tsundere girl, and how Rei was so much different than I expected at the beginning, but then everything got into place so smoothly in time. The game was pretty short, but I've loved every bit of it!
The drawings were also very detailed and professional, there isn't anything that I didn't like about this game!
Thank you so very very much for sharing it with us! I hope you're going to make more (longer) games in the future, and I wish you luck on that!

NaNa

[Puchin]

I LOVED IT SO MUCH.

I
LOVED
IT.

Can I fav it or something?

[sonnet009]

NanaNaninna:

Eee! Thank you for the feedback! The artwork isn't mine to take credit for, but I'm very glad you liked it. :) And thanks for giving me your view on the characters -- if I write them badly, then there's no hope for the game. So that's always my biggest concern. I can breathe a sigh of relief if you thought they were good. :D

And I am working on a larger VN right now, so I hope that -- if you play -- it meets your expectations.

Puchin:

:D Thanks! I'm so happy you enjoyed it!

[Lesleigh63]

My first experience of a VN. Thank you for writing something that was so engaging.

[sonnet009]

Lesleigh63:

Wow! Thank goodness I didn't put you off VNs for good! :) There are some really amazing ones out there. I hope you're enjoying discovering them all.

[LivelyCouton]

[ATTENTION: THIS HAVE SPOILER]
OMG! I'm always on this forum but never registred myself, but now I just had to do it. You game is awesome, just fucking awesome, seriously.
I'm Brazilian, but I understand english very well and I love VN, so I'm always on the forum, but I really needed to say that your game is beautiful. It lasted only a little, but just caught me. And I confess: I cried in the ending. On really, I cried when he was going to die and I pushed him. And then, when he didn't remember me, I started to cry. Really, I've done this game in ten minutes, but I still cried in my ending (that was "Memory").
Rei is just so cute and adorable <3 Please, you really should make a continuation of it! I really would play it. It's a little strange that the game don't have sounds at all, but when you really play it, like I did, you don't even notice that. I'm reeeeally proud of playing this game and I wanted to say "thank you" for you <3 This already made my day <3.

[shiho14]

Wow. I really love the story. It was well written and Aya and Rei are so adorable together, I love their interactions!

I'll be looking forward for more of your games