Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

#5461 Post by eingelle »

Making character sketches... which one looks best? :? (one from the ponytails and one from the... yeah XD)
I like the bottom left and bottom middle. ^^
I like the nice flowiness of the hair...

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#5462 Post by latte »

I wanted to post something, but it's a huge Clannad spoiler so I'll just leave the link, hope there's no problem:
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php? ... d=35973462

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#5463 Post by ShippoK »

latte wrote:I wanted to post something, but it's a huge Clannad spoiler so I'll just leave the link, hope there's no problem:
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php? ... d=35973462
I thought "Nagisa dies" was the new "Snape kills Dumbledore"
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#5464 Post by latte »

ShippoK wrote:
I thought "Nagisa dies" was the new "Snape kills Dumbledore"
rofl maybe, but since that scene is one of the emotional punches of the story and happens pretty late it'd still be bad to just post it. I wasn't even considering ghost Nagisa to be honest... :lol:

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#5465 Post by zankizuna »

My newest Character Marina :D
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#5466 Post by tiya_nofurita »

zankizuna wrote:My newest Character Marina :D
That's beautiful ! Keep up your progress ! :D
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#5467 Post by khfan12 »

Something I randomly thought of the other night (The guy is the character Vanitas from the Kingdom Hearts Games)

And the chibi with the ponytail is a self-chibi xD
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#5468 Post by Lumen_Astrum »

Something I did as my part of a collaboration. I wasn't entirely confident since the design looks overdone, but I'm quite proud of it. c:
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I know the anatomy looks so screwed up ;v; There's still her sword and all to be added.

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#5469 Post by SundownKid »

I don't think it's overdone, it looks like a great character design. Overdone to me is a million belts and zippers of no discernible purpose :lol:

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#5470 Post by Tempus »

I agree that it doesn't look overdone -- maybe the bare midsection and comparatively simpler dress helps balance it out and give your eyes a place to rest? I don't really know much about art, especially character art. All I know is I like it.
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#5471 Post by latte »

SundownKid wrote:I don't think it's overdone, it looks like a great character design. Overdone to me is a million belts and zippers of no discernible purpose :lol:
+1. I think this looks really pretty and feminine, and would love to see a colored version if you ever make one.

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#5472 Post by Pyonkotchi »

so on th dangan ronpa facebook rp they do a thing on fridays wehere we come up with fun ways to rp, this friday is crossover day. i rp as togami and i thought it would be fun to crossover to heart catch precure because magical girls

then i drew him in the art style
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#5473 Post by truefaiterman »

I was bored after watching a stream, so I made this:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0fW3l4_q ... e=youtu.be

As always, feedback is cool, even if I was lazy with this one.
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#5474 Post by mysterialize »

@KHfan12: I love that guy's expression. Mixed with his spiky hair and the pose of his neck he has loads of personality for someone who's just a head sketch.

@Lumen_Astrum: Those clothes are excellent. For being a pencil sketch there's quite a lot of detail going on, and the whole thing manages to feel like it has some depth. Her right foot is looking a little funky, though. There doesn't appear to be much of an ankle on it.

@Pyonkotchi: On this day, I saw the prettiest of magical girls.

@truefaterman: I'm loving those folds and hands. His right leg looks oddly skinny for such an otherwise overweight man, though. The same kind of goes for his right arm.

I'm trying to figure out how to color. I'm still feeling uncertain about how this one turned out.
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#5475 Post by deviltales »

WIP art of my 3 Queens :).
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