She and I [A KN that is quite short]

[thedarkdefender]

"She and I" is a short KN about a girl and a boy.
The story will be told by the guy's perspective.

"Oh! Another KN! I wonder what will make it so special?"
The answer is..... nothing, really.

This KN will feature the following:
>Original art, drawn by me. They are just scanned traditional drawings because, two words: Ihaveno tablet.

Screenshot:



Download link:
http://www.mediafire.com/?86mkdaauu3gaomx

The main reason why this KN was made is to test if I can actually do a decent GUI(though it's not all done).
The second reason is to pass some time while waiting for my laptop to start on my "real deals".

I hope you'll like it, somehow~

Please do throw some feedback.

Credits:
Music - Tam Music Factory

[merdeamour]

I think the GUI is beautiful--simple and elegant. That's about the only thing I can give feedback on right now, as you haven't provided a plot... Downloading it right now~

[thedarkdefender]

I don't think there really is a plot. Just a short story about a boy and a girl. It's not a love story though.
Thank you!

[merdeamour]

I liked the story--and your prose flowed well. I spotted a few mistakes like switching from past to present tense, but the narration was good and drew me in Again, congratulations on this! I loved the GUI, too (: I'm looking forward to your future VNs.

[thedarkdefender]

Thank you! I do admit that I have some difficulties regarding that one >.< but I'll work on it.
Again, thank you