My Magical Girl Romance (Worst VN/KN 2013)

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My Magical Girl Romance (Worst VN/KN 2013)

#1 Post by Kokoro Hane » Thu May 23, 2013 1:36 am

A story about a guy named Mo, he meets a strange redhead named Risa, who confesses a secret. Whether he believes this secret just may determine his future.

- Gorgeous artwork drawn with the mouse on MS Paint.
- 4+ CGs.
- A heartwarming storyline, full of romance.
- Wonderful voice acting, that randomly changes levels, recorded with a lovely headset mic.
- HEED MY HEADPHONE WARNING; MENU MUSIC IS LOUD

I gladly would love to hear feedback~


.....so yeah, this is my entry for the worst VN/KN 2013 thing. Just made it today! Umm, enjoy?

DOWNLOAD; https://tofu-sheets-visual.itch.io/my-m ... rl-romance

(oh guy, I can't believe my first released project is this one....er, technically my first released VN was Reverse Robin if collabs count >.>)
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#2 Post by trepiechick » Thu May 23, 2013 9:10 am

Congrats on your first project! I'm going to give you my honest opinion on this...I didn't like it. It's supposed to be bad, yes, but it felt rushed, and yet, at the same time, like you were focusing on all the little things that make a bad vn (bad art, spelling, annoying voices) instead of giving it your own unique flair and making it yours. There's no life to it. You have a lovely voice, and I eagerly await the reveal of what's sure to be really awesome work.:D

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#3 Post by Kokoro Hane » Thu May 23, 2013 10:50 am

trepiechick wrote:Congrats on your first project! I'm going to give you my honest opinion on this...I didn't like it. It's supposed to be bad, yes, but it felt rushed, and yet, at the same time, like you were focusing on all the little things that make a bad vn (bad art, spelling, annoying voices) instead of giving it your own unique flair and making it yours. There's no life to it. You have a lovely voice, and I eagerly await the reveal of what's sure to be really awesome work.:D
Thank you for playing! (Yay, I succeeded in it sucking...*rubs hands and grins evily*)

And I should have a demo out of one of my good projects soon XD
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#4 Post by Ezaki » Fri May 24, 2013 12:24 pm

I downloaded this just now and played it. You totally made me laugh listening to the voices! XD
But, sorry. It was worth my time~~:D I liked it. *laugh* By the way, nice evil laugh.

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#5 Post by Haze » Sat May 25, 2013 5:41 pm

Oh my goodness...this was so bad...and so hilarious...

Seriously though, I couldn't stop laughing throughout the whole thing. I also couldn't stop groaning at the horrible art and voice acting.
My favorite part was when the bus driver said "OH NO! I THINK I HIT SOMETHING, GUYZZZ!" The voice acting for that part was just so... I don't even know.
Congrats on making your bad-yet-hilarious game!
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#6 Post by Kokoro Hane » Sat May 25, 2013 7:55 pm

It's sad when you want people to not like it, and they do anyway XD So, I am sorta happy I guess, despite losing the challenge? I think my mistake was having the voice acting. That killed it XD

Thank you all for playing it, though!
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#7 Post by Coren » Sun May 26, 2013 4:55 am

I'm playing this! "Gorgeous artwork drawn with the mouse on MS Paint." Oh gosh I'm reminded of Quest Twilight Prince Prophecy Chronicles once more. XD

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#8 Post by Kokoro Hane » Sun May 26, 2013 7:30 pm

Kirroha wrote:I'm playing this! "Gorgeous artwork drawn with the mouse on MS Paint." Oh gosh I'm reminded of Quest Twilight Prince Prophecy Chronicles once more. XD
Oh my goodness....another victim!
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#9 Post by AngelicBlood » Fri May 31, 2013 10:00 am

After playing this game, I felt just...wordless.
It was so sad, yet so enjoyable. I nearly cried when
Mo got hit by the bus and died. I feel so guilty for not believing Risa :'(
.It was very touching, and the art was so beautiful..you made me wanna cry.
10/10 for this beautiful piece of work!

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#10 Post by pkt » Fri May 31, 2013 1:19 pm

I'm gonna play this....heh heh heh
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#11 Post by Coren » Sat Jun 01, 2013 9:02 am

I can't seem to download because Mediafire hates me. ): I guess I'll try tomorrow...

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#12 Post by Kokoro Hane » Sat Jun 01, 2013 11:48 am

Kirroha wrote:I can't seem to download because Mediafire hates me. ): I guess I'll try tomorrow...
I hope it works! If not, I'll find some other place to upload it! Although I remember azure playing, so you could probably get it from her, too.
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#13 Post by lilyrose » Fri Jul 12, 2013 10:56 pm

I haven't got to play it yet T.T but this thought kinda struck me sideways... the names, Mo and Risa, are off one of my favorite books Inkheart. XD I'm not sure if this was intentional or not ^_^' buuuuuut I'm not complain. It gives me another reason, besides curiousity XD, to play it. :)
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#14 Post by Kokoro Hane » Mon Jul 15, 2013 1:39 pm

lilyrose wrote:I haven't got to play it yet T.T but this thought kinda struck me sideways... the names, Mo and Risa, are off one of my favorite books Inkheart. XD I'm not sure if this was intentional or not ^_^' buuuuuut I'm not complain. It gives me another reason, besides curiousity XD, to play it. :)
LOL I actually did not realize that XD

I hope you enjoy it...no, wait...you're not suppose to, otherwise I failed the challenge XD
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#15 Post by Kokoro Hane » Sun Mar 31, 2019 3:21 pm

So a little late.... but a few months ago, I had re-uploaded this atrocity to my itch.io page, so I'm just posting to notify that I have updated the link in the main post (and a much needed headphone user warning). I mean, it's part of my VN history and it was fun to make....

I actually kind of wish someone will make this challenge again xD

EDIT: What the hell.... why does this thread have 6,000+ views? How many people played this trainwreck when it was still on Mediafire?! o.o
Hahahaha, guess comedy is my specialty after all~
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