Hi everyone! This here is the concept outline of my first soon-to-be game!
There's not much progress yet except with the story and characters. The only reason I'm out here with this thread is 'cause I want to see what people think of the game while it's still in development -particularly with the story. I want to make sure people like how it's going, so I can change things quickly in case they don't.
I shall be updating this thread ever-so-often so no worries!
I'm using Tokudaya's beautiful sprites! (Hopefully you guys aren't too sick of them haha)
Mackenzie Stewart is the daughter of a hotshot American private eye. And for as long as she can remember, it has been her destiny to be a detective like her father. While Kenzie settles for solving petty little cases
secret is found out?
P R O T A G O N I S T
// Mackenzie Stewart //
high school detective / daughter of a hotshot American private eye
age 16
traits smart, brave, keen, daring
likes mystery puzzles
dislikes criminals
Kenzie is smart and has a keen eye for investigation. As a child, her father brought her along in his investigations, which eventually lead Kenzie to her career choice. To keep her identity a secret, Kenzie uses the alias "Yuki Narumi" in Jordan High and has cut her hair short to look more masculine.
// Dylan Taylor //
age 17
traits intelligent, bookworm, gentleman
likes mystery novels
dislikes papercuts
Dylan is a bookworm who loves reading mystery novels. He calls himself a "resident" of the school library because he hardly ever leaves it. He enjoys teasing Kenzie, and occassionally gives her detective puzzles while playfully calling her "Detective". He and Hikaru are close friends.
// Hikaru Kato //
age 17
traits confident, stubborn, happy-go-lucky
likes pranks, skipping classes
dislikes boredom, Jun
Hikaru is famous in Jordan High for causing all sorts of trouble
// Jun //
age 16
traits quiet, serious, loner
likes music, singing, piano
dislikes being bothered
Jun, or Min Ha Joon, is a Korean student at Jordan High. He is a Junior like Kenzie, and is very popular with the ladies. However, he prefers to be alone and does not like people approaching him. Just like how he is with everyone else, he is initially indifferent with Kenzie and is irritated at her. He is a graduating trainee of a talent agency in Korea and is set to debut in a group the next year.
S U P P O R T I N G
// Akihiko Takano //
age 24
Akihiko is the police detective who is supervising Kenzie's assignment. He is usually dead serious but is easily caught off-guard. He is an orphan who lost his parents in a gunfire during a police ambush.
// Kirika Minamoto //
age 32
Kirika is a police officer who has been good friends with Kenzie's dad. She is mature and motherly, and has been looking after Akihiko since he was a trainee.
// Chiharu Tanizawa //
age 19
Chiharu, or better known for her stage name "Charlotte", is an idol who complains that she has been getting threats from an obsessed stalker. She is bubbly and airheaded, and comes from a family of high-rank police officers. She speaks in an irritating shrill voice.
Sprites Tokudaya
Story 40%
Script 0%
Sprites 100%
Backgrounds 50%
Music 100%
Sound Effects 50%
Coding 0%