Deadly attachment [KN] [Murder mystery]
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Deadly attachment [KN] [Murder mystery]
Hello! This is our first small KN project, a murder mystery. So the motto is "simple but completed'! Well hopefully...
Plot
It's been 4 years since Samantha last saw her stepbrother Daniel. Suddenly he comes back home for her eighteenth birhtday with his new girlfriend Jess. Sam can't be any happier - she always adored Dan and missed him terribly. But their reunion is ruined with the news of Jess' death. Police considers it to be a robbery but Sam sensising something fishy decides to start her own investigation.
Characters
Sam, 18.
Dan, 23. Samantha's stepbrother.
Jess, 23. Dan's girlfriend.
Sam's mother, 45. Remarried when Sam was 12.
David, 51. Sam's stepfather.
Background
Progress
Writing 100%
Sprites 95%
BG 100%
CG 90%
GUI 50%
Programming 0%
Thanks for reading! More information and CGs coming next!
Plot
It's been 4 years since Samantha last saw her stepbrother Daniel. Suddenly he comes back home for her eighteenth birhtday with his new girlfriend Jess. Sam can't be any happier - she always adored Dan and missed him terribly. But their reunion is ruined with the news of Jess' death. Police considers it to be a robbery but Sam sensising something fishy decides to start her own investigation.
Characters
Sam, 18.
Dan, 23. Samantha's stepbrother.
Jess, 23. Dan's girlfriend.
Sam's mother, 45. Remarried when Sam was 12.
David, 51. Sam's stepfather.
Background
Progress
Writing 100%
Sprites 95%
BG 100%
CG 90%
GUI 50%
Programming 0%
Thanks for reading! More information and CGs coming next!
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This looks interesting ^^ Can't wait for more updates.
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Re: Deadly attachment [KN] [Murder mystery]
When you say murder mystery, what kind of tone are you going for? A classic Cluedo, something more dark and oppressive?
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@Hazel-Bun Thank you very much! Some CGs are coming soon!
@SixOfSpades Thanks for your question! I guess it's more of a psychological story about people's dark sides which are hard to see if you're not looking.
@SixOfSpades Thanks for your question! I guess it's more of a psychological story about people's dark sides which are hard to see if you're not looking.
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The step brother is so hot
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^ Always the smexy ones are family members... ;P
This sounds very interesting! I LOVE murder mysteries.
This sounds very interesting! I LOVE murder mysteries.
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@natkinos omg thanks! And I'm afraid he knows how to use it ^___^
@Lyyli thank you!
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Re: Deadly attachment [KN] [Murder mystery]
Your project seems pretty interesting, and the art is nice, too. Nice CG up there!
Just want to say, though...
Just want to say, though...
the title seems like it's saying Dan killed Jess- since they're dating and all, it would be a "deadly attachment. I'm hoping I'm wrong and this is a red herring...
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@Haze Thank you! Well the story is pretty short (3800 words) so I'd hate to spoil anything. I hope it'll be still enjoyable ^___^''
Here's the first screenshot! What do you think about colors? I've been checking images on different devices, and on some of them they look too bright (on samsung note, for instance).
Here's the first screenshot! What do you think about colors? I've been checking images on different devices, and on some of them they look too bright (on samsung note, for instance).
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I'm not a big KN fan, but holy schmao-zow, this looks great!
I'd totally download it!
Your artwork is gorgeous, and I always get a kick out of whodunit mysteries (as long as they're not predictable).
Can't wait for the release of this game!
I'd totally download it!
Your artwork is gorgeous, and I always get a kick out of whodunit mysteries (as long as they're not predictable).
Can't wait for the release of this game!
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OMG, that's a GREAT cg!!!
I totes wanna play/read the game! =D
I totes wanna play/read the game! =D
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Oooh!! Mystery! I must follow this unrelentingly. I think the art style is completely perfect for the genre! Mystery is a very tricky undertaking for a first project especially, so I really admire you guys for going for it! I'll be looking very forward to playing this! Yay!
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That CG just wants me to see the full game even more! Hope it comes out soon! I'll be waiting!
Also, hope you guys at Dotama Studios have a Merry Christmas!
Also, hope you guys at Dotama Studios have a Merry Christmas!
My first completed visual novel, which is at 1.3, it's final version(woo hoo!): Monster Uses CPU 2
Finally at version 1.0: White Fog
I make one song every week, all for free download! This weeks song: Synthis- The Mirror(Eliana Remix)[Preview]
You might ask yourself: If I could only save one paragraph of the work I'm writing, which one would I save?
Which one would I let go first?
-from Understanding Rhetoric: A Graphic Guide to Writing by Elizabeth Losh, Johnathan Alexander, Kevin Cannon, and Zander Cannon
Finally at version 1.0: White Fog
I make one song every week, all for free download! This weeks song: Synthis- The Mirror(Eliana Remix)[Preview]
You might ask yourself: If I could only save one paragraph of the work I'm writing, which one would I save?
Which one would I let go first?
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