Eiji hates women. There's no way to get around it. He's a player, disrespectful, sexist—well, that's the least you can say about him and still sound "kind". However, Eiji has found himself in a terrible predicament after crossing Rina and Shiori, the two girls who know exactly how to get revenge. How? By summoning a creature of pure spite. This creature—coincidentally named Oizys, after the Greek goddess of Misery—puts a curse on Eiji, turning him into the one thing he hates. A woman.
Eiji can't turn back until he falls in love—which is a difficult task for someone in such a predicament, after all—with one person Oizys deems fit. Could it be possible?
Eiji Sugimoto (17/M)
Our doomed main character who can be summed up as a tsundere. As mentioned before, he is sexist, a player, and disrespectful. He goes by "Eiko" once changed.
A Meep (a race I created—demon fairies who inflict pain on a certain aspect of a person's life based on color) who curses Eiji. The mark that proves she's watching (and, well, she always is) is a neon green butterfly.
Tetsuo Goto (17/M)
Eiji's best friend who is actually a lot nicer than Eiji.
Shy, timid. Eiji's girlfriend in the beginning of the story.
Shiori Imai (17/F)
Rina's best friend. Loud, bossy, and basically willing to fight anyone.
A couple questions... (sorry if these sound kind of... Well, stupid)
1. Do you think the plot sounds okay? Would it sound better if there were multiple love interests and one true ending?
2. Does the banner look like one a shoujo manga/anime would have? Should it be brighter with a different font?
3. Does this look too... Overwhelming for a first project? (Keep in mind, I'm doing the writing, sprites, and coding myself)
4. Does Oizys's race make sense?
That's all I wanted to know. Thank you! ^^