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Lacuna (Otome,GxB,Fantasy) DEMO UP

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STORY:

Lacuna is an otome visual novel about Queen Alexia and a strong power she possesses passed down from generations. At the moment after her death, she meets the great demon king Seth who claims he will bring her back to life, on one condition. Her soul. Once she fulfills what she desires, to find her little long lost brother, she will give up her soul. However, Alexia only has one month before her time runs out. Life as a Queen is full of various duties and suitors who seek her hand in marriage. Will she somehow make it in time despite her chaotic life?

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Queen Alexia- The queen of England, a very straight forward and opinionated queen who cares alot about her people and country. She can be rude and a bit high and mighty at times but is kind at heart.

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Seth-The demon king which shares an unbreakable bond with Alexia. He's arrogant, highly perverted, and acts very much like a little kid sometimes for a thousand year old demon.

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Elliot-A short man which is a few years older than Alexia and is one of her potential marriage partners. He's rude, acts older than he looks and doesn't seem to have many friends because of it.

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Noah-Alexia's childhood friend, also known as the two faced priest who appears innocent and nice but in reality is the total opposite. He's extremely popular among the ladies and seems to only be his true self when with Alexia.

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Ian-A gentlemen Alexia meets by chance in the streets. He's clumsy, weird, quiet, and tends to have trouble saying what he really feels.

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Vince(Not Obtainable)-A poor villiage man who makes small talk with Alexia from time to time. He's extremely friendly, easy to talk to and has this mysteriousness about him.

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Isabel-Alexia's personal maid who is at her side most of the times. She's a bit shy, a little too determined when she sets her mind on something and deeply cares for Queen Alexia as a servant and friend.

Credits:
Music- StudioA'
Art-Tokudaya
Gui-Cube

Progress:
Sprites-100%
Story-50%
Music&Background-100%
Script-5%
Gui-100%

Hey everyone this is my first otome game and I was wondering a few things...
1. Who's your favorite character so far?
2. Does this story sound interesting to you and would you play it?
3. Any suggestions or feedback?

Thanks :)

For the demo: http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 45&t=25813
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Re: Lacuna (Otome.BxG)

#2 Post by Asceai »

I'm curious about the 'Otome, BxG' part- those seem to be contradictory tags.

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Asceai wrote:I'm curious about the 'Otome, BxG' part- those seem to be contradictory tags.
Thanks, I meant GxB.

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Another otome game in development!? SO HAPPY! :D


1. I like Seth and Noah! XD
2. Of course I would play it! The plot seems nice and there are lots of guys to choose from. :oops:
3. Please release a demo firs cause I would like to see how the characters interact with each other and stuff. :)


Good luck! :D

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This seems interesting enough. But is this really going to be set in England? The fact that there's a demon king suggests to me that you may want to choose a fictional setting instead. It takes a lot of skill, effort, and time to incorporate fantasy elements into a real-world setting and maintain a credible story.
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try10 wrote:Another otome game in development!? SO HAPPY! :D


1. I like Seth and Noah! XD
2. Of course I would play it! The plot seems nice and there are lots of guys to choose from. :oops:
3. Please release a demo firs cause I would like to see how the characters interact with each other and stuff. :)


Good luck! :D
Thanks and I will be sure to release a demo first!

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Mad Harlequin wrote:This seems interesting enough. But is this really going to be set in England? The fact that there's a demon king suggests to me that you may want to choose a fictional setting instead. It takes a lot of skill, effort, and time to incorporate fantasy elements into a real-world setting and maintain a credible story.

Yes, I've already worked my way around that part and I think it's going great :) Thanks for pointing that out, I'll make sure it works out!

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#8 Post by dreamy »

Hi!
Wow! The plot looks very fun and exciting and the art is so pretty :)
All the characters also seem interesting in their own way I can't choose DX
Good luck with the project can't wait to see it come out^^
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Why, thank you ^ ^

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#10 Post by Lexi »

Hey guys, please check out the demo!

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#11 Post by scorlight »

Nice art there, the MC is about... middle-age? @@ Hmm, the demon king looks sooo familiar to one of the character in the manga I read (about a kind girl who was called Death Princess and was forced to married a devil duke)
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#12 Post by Cain0425 »

can you fall in love with the demon king to?

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yes she is about middle aged and you can fall in love with the demon king :)

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#14 Post by try10 »

Played the demo and it was ok. I'll be waiting for the full game.

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#15 Post by Lexi »

Im glad u think so ^ ^

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