Man, your figure-drawing is coming along in leaps and bounds!DaFool wrote:Like this?
To me, though - while it's a great picture on its own - she looks a little embarrassed/nervous for someone who's proud of their huge collection of panties... I guess that's PyTom's call, though.
I'm in two minds as to whether it might look better without the breast line over the dress on the near side, as well...
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Yeah, this is actually still a bit low on a list of my priorities, which include:
- Buying a car to replace my dead one.
- Helping out with a game release.
- Finishing 6.3.2.
As well as some paying work.
(When was the last time you backed up your game?)
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I'll try to go for a 16-year-old feel next time... and it seems like this project won't be 2-3 weeks like previously indicated but instead around 2 months at this rate, tis okay.
Oh, and if I can't really position a full standing posture and the ADV text box covers it... perhaps make it NVL or centered subtitles instead, so the panties are visible at all times.
Forget the regular audience - just give her glasses and a maid uniform, damnit!monele wrote:Too bad the regular audience wants them younger ^^;...
You said it... I love the character design. Plus, her panty collection could be much more... refined... than the schoolgirl's.monele wrote:*droooool*... Too bad the regular audience wants them younger ^^;...
EDIT: Oh, and yes... glasses... definitely a must.
That's, of course... a valid argument, even though with some effort there is no reason that crazy can't work in any age group... but sure, it's probably the easiest way to do the kome thing.PyTom wrote:I see this as being a silly game, and I think silly works better with younger-looking characters.
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Make her a redhead and I'll be playing this just because of that combo!
Regarding the drawing...I can only see one major problem with it: she looks too embaressed <sp?>. I would think, if she were pound of her panty collection, while she might be slightly embaressed to show it to a guy...not to the extent which she appears to be.
DaFool, you draw the BEST boobage I've ever seen on the internet, it makes me so envious it's not even funny @w@
So soft, roundish, big, yet not too subject to the laws of gravity(other women know what I'm talking about)
The breasts I draw look like silicon! ;_;Teach me?Write a tutorial and build a military of ecchi manga drawers?
Too bad the character apparently has to look younger, all the prettiness is going to waste...
Well, time to be honest, I'm also this kind of person... who appreciates this. I've already commented about Katja's cleavage in the NT thread. And this is also just... well, time to stop now.monele wrote:definitely among the "beautifully natural"
All in all, the message is, I think, very simple - DaFool, drop everything you do, and make a game that focuses on this... matter ^_^. No need for literature, the frustrated housewife, the overworked secretary, the lonely teacher (even all three at once)... and you'd have your winner, I'm sure.
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Since the story hasn't really been ironed out yet, then I suppose we can start with the characters first.
Since there seems to be a consensus, Jenny will be now a maid-uniform-wearing, glasses-wearing, 16-year-old big-busted redhead. I'll try to make her more spunky and proud too.
Ren: Thanks! I've been drawing boobs since I was 11 years old, even though I didn't really call myself an artist prior to getting into visual novels. It takes a lot of observation as well as patience in making correctly bending lines. Drawing cheeks and buttocks is almost as hard. I dunno... maybe my eyes are more sensitive to these perspectives. I don't know about a tutorial, but I guess making more of these things will serve as good examples.
mikey: I have been planning a boob-fetish yaruge for sometime. But I have to get that somewhat cleaner non-ero game or two out so as not to cement the wrong reputation I'd rather have multiple trademarks.
mugenjohncel wrote:GLASSES AND MAID UNIFORM IS FINE TOO... if you know what I meanForget the regular audience - just give her glasses and a maid uniform, damnit!
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Uuuuh, I like OL uniforms!That's why I included a blue tight skirt, blue jacket, black shirt and panty hoses in the Alice pack :3*was secretly hoping for someone to make a H game with a office lady or something*
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