An impromptu KN that I decided to make today. Writing took me 2+ hours, coding took me another 3+ hours. Managed to finish it under one day.
I apologize in advance if there is any grammatical errors or if I left out something. I checked but I didn't notice any errors - then again i'm half asleep (://shot)
I know it's far from perfect, but I hope that you guys will still give it a try.
2000+ words
Story:
A short story about growing up.
DL link:
Mac: https://www.mediafire.com/?i1d0e1qef2qvr1k
Win: https://www.mediafire.com/?o9swgs2es2ogj1v
Linux: http://www.mediafire.com/download/22626 ... ux.tar.bz2
(P.S: If for some reason the game/link doesn't work please tell me. I can't test for all the platforms so yeah :/ Sorry.)
Thanks for reading and hope you enjoyed it!
[Credits to feainne-stock(http://feainne-stock.deviantart.com) for the background photos]
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Last edited by AsHLeX on Thu Oct 16, 2014 9:04 pm, edited 1 time in total.
It's a nice little story, there were a few grammatical errors but other than that it was a good story. One other thing is that the girl seemed the same in terms of speech (there were a lot of "uwaaah" and stuff like that), it's fine, but can make her seems annoying, and also doesn't help show the change in age and maturity.
Thanks!