Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
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Thanks, Tempus! The coloring I've been doing is actually (and laughably) simple; I just lay down flats and apply a some texture layers and overlays plus, luminosity on SAI.Tempus wrote:@MaiMai: I like the colouring of the last two characters you've posted!
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It would be in bad taste to double post, but I actually drew another picture! (Some of you who hang around on Tumblr probably recognize this.)
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Would it be okay if I dump art? Anyway... critic please!
The files aren't fit for the forum, so I'm gonna post the links. Please note some of those are kiiiinda unfinished. And kinda means 'not shaded because I forgot'.
[*] Surprised pose
[*] Troll pose
[*] Character named Luke
[*] Catherine not the crazy one
[*] A guy
[*] Chibis
The files aren't fit for the forum, so I'm gonna post the links. Please note some of those are kiiiinda unfinished. And kinda means 'not shaded because I forgot'.
[*] Surprised pose
[*] Troll pose
[*] Character named Luke
[*] Catherine not the crazy one
[*] A guy
[*] Chibis
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What is it that you would like to be critiqued on, Broyi? I think there are a lot of things you can improve on and at least the first thing I can suggest is working on studying human anatomy. Is there something else you had in mind that you would like to focus on aside from that though?Broyi wrote:Would it be okay if I dump art? Anyway... critic please!
The files aren't fit for the forum, so I'm gonna post the links. Please note some of those are kiiiinda unfinished. And kinda means 'not shaded because I forgot'.
[*] Surprised pose
[*] Troll pose
[*] Character named Luke
[*] Catherine not the crazy one
[*] A guy
[*] Chibis
Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
Actually, I'm looking for critic for everything. Maybe shadowing? I'm having some slight troubles with that one.
Should I shadow with pen or with airbrush? Or with something else?
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An example of shading with pen is the 'Chibi' one, and an example with airbrush is Luke.
Should I shadow with pen or with airbrush? Or with something else?
~ Edit ~
An example of shading with pen is the 'Chibi' one, and an example with airbrush is Luke.
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Thoughts?
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In terms of coloring/shading technique, you can use either pen or airbrush. There's no one set way. I made a list of digital art tutorials so you can look at one of the coloring tutorials to see how people approach shading.Broyi wrote:Actually, I'm looking for critic for everything. Maybe shadowing? I'm having some slight troubles with that one.
Should I shadow with pen or with airbrush? Or with something else?
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An example of shading with pen is the 'Chibi' one, and an example with airbrush is Luke.
I think you really need to improve on drawing human figures before worrying about coloring though. Here's another list of resources for art fundamentals, with anatomy at the top: http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 80#p195266
I really stress anatomy because you may be drawing in an anime/manga style, but it won't look good if you don't learn/teach yourself the basics. Right now, the immediate problem I see with your characters is that they look like blobs, due to the fact that there's no structure to their bodies and faces. A good thing, however, is that they're quite expressive.
The colors on the dress are nice. I think the textures are overdone, however, and it overpowers your normal shading. The lineart needs to be a little neater in my opinion and I think the anatomy could be tweaked a little because the shoulder looks wider than the actual skirt of the dress even though it's supposed to be balloon-y.Sayumi101 wrote:A sprite commission I did. First time drawing balloon-y clothes ^^; (Yes, I mentally call them that, rather than 17th Century Gowns >.<)
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Some screens I mocked up for our 48hr Asylum Jam game, Saving Zoey.
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It's funny you should say that since I'd only just discovered textures >.< So I went a little bit craaaaazy with them. Anatomy is one of my weak points so I'll try my best to brush up on it more. ^^MaiMai wrote: I think the textures are overdone, however, and it overpowers your normal shading. The lineart needs to be a little neater in my opinion and I think the anatomy could be tweaked a little because the shoulder looks wider than the actual skirt of the dress even though it's supposed to be balloon-y.
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WIP title screen art for my VN, A+ Switch!
Still need to add a decent background, and line and color the girls ^-^
Still need to add a decent background, and line and color the girls ^-^
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