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Pluvial [Romance, Slice of Life]

#1 Post by potouto »

under major revamp, to be back during April-May 2016
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Oh, I really like your character designs. And the logo. :D The story seems a bit vague, but I guess that might have been your intention. Still, I look forward to seeing more about this project.
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#3 Post by Hazel-Bun »

Beautiful!!! I can't wait to see more :D
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#4 Post by Laniessa »

Oh, it's so cute *a* Love the art, good luck with the project!

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*steals Ashton away* *0*

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#6 Post by potouto »

@CSV: Thank you! I will try to update a better synopsis soon. I'm sorry for the inconvinient.
@Hazel-Bun & @Laniessa: uguu thanks to you both, we have a great artist
@Mono: "..."
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Update: Some concept art to show, the script is advancing to chapter 2 with the nonstop rain even in Winter. A demo coming soon!
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#7 Post by akemicchi »

I agree with the others, the art is so pretty. o|-< Good luck with everything! :D Can't wait to play the demo! ^^

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ROLLS INTO THE SUN I'M
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EXCITED FOR THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ! ! ! ! ! !!!!!!!
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@akemichi: SENPAI NOTICED M...Y PROJECT THANKS YOU haha I hope it will live up everyone's expectation!
@euphoriabutts: YOU'RE HERE OTL The character design are done for most characters except Charlie, succuren wants to color the whole stuffs so I have to take down the profile to redo it later GOMEN
I need to include the features and update the character profiles along with improved storyline next time. JUST BECAUSE.
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#10 Post by euphorics »

why am i a butt omg-
but is ok hhHHH I LOOK FORWARD TO THE FULLY COLORED CHARACTER DESIGNS EEEE, SO EXCITE
i believe in succuren's amazing skills, heheh u v u
THE STORYLINE ALSO SOUNDS GREAT OMG, IDK WHAT YOU'RE TALKING ABOUT. rain is such a nice theme, and all the characters sound so cute * v * (my favorite is that little thingy in the 'whoops' screenshot going "wanna fight" uheuhuehue)
p.s. Ashton already has hair surpassing the level of every man's dream \o/
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#11 Post by potouto »

@euphomos:
we can always have alternative if you don't like butts
YOU BETTER she's working for commissions for the 3ds so I won't rush with anything wee
LIAR YOU DO KNOW WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT
I didn't realise rain actually have something to do with the plot until I'm half way through the second chapter. Thank you thank you. ●▽●
(I rejected otl but it's still too beautiful to not show)
Of course he did, he is *flips hair* Ashton after all
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#12 Post by AsHLeX »

That art!!! *starry eyed* I love it so much <3
Good luck with everything!!
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#13 Post by noeinan »

Looks cute! I am a fan of both the fabulousness of that unicorn shirt and of combat butlers. (Hayate~!)
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#14 Post by potouto »

@AsHLeX: Thank you very much!
@daikiraikimi: Ah yes it seemed that the two are most loved characters, especially Ashton.

Mini-update #1: Dec 2nd, 2014
As you can see, the thread has been improved greatly and I'm well-satisfied.
Chapter 2 is done, but the second draft is still in progress. Be patient friends!
Charlie is still the most problematic character to design imo
subconsciously forget about Ellie
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#15 Post by astrokeofmadness »

Is it just me or is Neils Katana totally slipping out of its straps XD Also us canadians dont stumble on ahs umms and ehs! Your umm a big fat liar! Please change this eh!

Anyways... enough with the horrible Canadian humor, I vote for look 3 or 4 for Charlie. No Ascot!

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