Hi alyIt!
I hope you've been having a lovely holiday season!
Here are some typos and such that I found when I played through version 1.1. The bug I saw in version 1.0 (Jasper’s sprite appearing behind Ria when she gave me beauty tips) didn't seem to be there anymore, so right on! I bolded the part of the sentence with the problem, because even I had a hard time noticing it sometimes when I’d read back through the list, even though I found it in the first place. I hope this helps!
(sorry for the long post)
From the game introduction:
“For you in particular. One
can not begin until one knows what one has begun, after all.”
“You were escorted by strange, silver-eyed servants into a large castle, made in part, by great
frescoes of colored glass.”
[I learned that a fresco is made by painting on wet plaster. I think you might be thinking of a mosaic made of colored glass rather than a fresco.]
“Will you be
a actor of fate, or merely one of its victims?”
“You would have preferred it otherwise, but now that
your here you’ll adapt.”
After I’ve made my character and become a delegate from Hise:
“It was a difficult choice, but after seeing the effect of having lost your mother had on him, and the worry your being gone had, you couldn’t put him through that again.”
[This just seemed a little confusing. One possible alternative: “It was a difficult choice, but after seeing the effect that losing your mother had on him, and the worry your being gone had caused, you couldn’t put him through that again.”]
“Unsurprisingly, the group of your countrymen is diverse and loud- both in the way
the are dressed and in actual literal volume.”
“The son of the leader of the free cities, here given the
curtsy title of Prince, although Hise has no such thing as royalty, and his cousin, an actual princess on her father’s side, came to the Isle on their own ship.”
“She is the only one of the delegation that did not win a contest, having received special permission
for the Leader of the Free Cities…”
“Princess Penelope stands with natural grace, showing off her elaborate
silver-brocade gown.”
[The description doesn’t match the sprite.]
“Prince Zarad takes your hand into his and bows over it deeply, looking up at you through lidded eyes with
an carefully restrained smolder.”
“You put your hand
and his and willingly allow him to pull you into a waltz.”
“You do your best to flirt as charismatically as he
he is.”
“The incomparable lady Avalie smiles as you approach, but her eyes are questioning as she looks you over, giving every appearance of having no idea who
are you.”
“
Llsle smiles at you, clearly not minding your relative informality.”
“You don’t know what to say and before you know it you have
agreed find a different conversational partner.” [Grand Duke Woodly]
[Zarad’s letter] “I cannot help it,
it as if you have put me under a spell or trapped me in a fever.”
“By now their voices are raised to full on angry shouts and your fears that this will surely escalate to a physical violence is not helped by the sound of a loud
shacking crash as something bumps into your door.”
“In any case, that’s enough of that. Isn't it time for
you leave for your morning plans?” [Jasper]
“You arrive slightly tardy from the time you were meant to meet, and hasten to apologize, but the smile Lord Clarmont greets you with is almost heart-stoppingly dazzling as he quickly waves aside your apology and invites
you sit.”
“I confess, although it has not been that long since our previous conversation, tonight’s dinner and
to chance to get to know you better hasn’t been far from my mind since you accepted my invitation.”
“So I brought back this injured bunny and watched over it, checking
in it every hour for something like three nights straight…”
“It wasn’t long before our entire manor and yard was completely overrun by little Snowball’s
decedents.”
“Ana grins at you cheerfully before spotting something
in distance and making a reluctant grumpy face.”
“Still, you are confident that not only do you
know understand Princess Ana better, but you are also much better equipped to defend yourself.”
“I hope you have as
an enjoyable an evening as I intend to.”
“… I got here just as lady Avalie was
bearing her fangs.” [I think it should be “baring.”]
“By now the sun has finished its brilliant
decent and you can see the twinkling of many bright stars.”
“Even if you were tempted by such an offer, you knew that being caught in a position so
comprising with a man you barely knew…”
“Still we best not change any spontaneous explosions if anyone were to hear us and talk of something else.” [I didn't understand this sentence at all when I played, but now I think maybe “change” should be “chance”? I got kind of lost during the latter end of the conversation with Zarad, but maybe that’s just me.]
“But as quickly as it came, the moment is gone, and he jumps to his feet and
he offering you a hand up.”
“Apparently, I’m a
laundresses nightmare.” [Hamin]
“But don’t worry, I plan to bring
to you all the best spots.” [Hamin]
“… he waves and hurries off, his departure as much
as a storm as his arrival.”
“
So tries so hard to live up to what she thinks she should be…” [Lisle talking about Penelope]
“You just hope that
war if begins, it won’t be started by someone stabbing someone sitting next to you at the dinner table…”
“You
head the grand library and begin searching for the
illusive Duke…” [I think you mean “elusive.”]
“I
imaging there are few people such a topic would more relevant to than us delegates at this particular summit.”
“So 7 people have accepted you invitation and will join you for tea.” [The event was actually a musicale.]
“It’s barely a few notes, but already you feel enchanted, like you
have brought into another, more magical world.”
“The fact that you have managed to drag the
illusive Duke Lyon to a group social event has caused no small amount of gossip.”
“Princess Ana comes up
to shaking her head a little.”
“Still, next time let’s sneak off and
doing something a little more adventurous, shall we?” [Hamin at a musicale]
“You aren’t about to look
at gift of extra time to prepare, or explore in the mouth.”
“After that
bald pronouncement, Princess Ana grins wider and dances back to her seat.” [I’m guessing you meant to type “bold,” although I think “bald” works here too!]
“Not one who can
discussion fashion with you in the lot.” [Zarad]
Bugs at the end of this playthrough
Image ‘demo|end’ not found.
Image ‘candowk2’not found.
Image ‘democredit’ not found.
Started the game again as a sheltered princess
“As such, you've had
a long to prepare for this day. Did you?”
