Some Story with Friends v0.2 [Comedy][Horror][Mixed]

[Foxx]

Its a Demo, the name is in work. In this novel, You and 4 others go on several adventures with multiple endings. Thats really all I got.

Demo: http://1drv.ms/15t8N4V (So far its got NO images whatsoever. And its still being worked on as I post this.)

[Saltome]

...Microsoft drive? Now that's not something I've seen before.
The download speed seems rather low, you may wanna upload it somewhere else.
And now about the forum topic... I hate that part too, but do yourself a favor and freshen up the topic a bit.
... there doesn't appear to be any official guideline regarding creation of demo topics? Any admins around..?
Well... feel free to use the other demo topics as an example.
In any case, looks like you are too eager and impatient. Put more effort into it before showing it to people.
I did find a couple of mistakes so I'm gonna attach them in a file for you.
And watch those 's, seems to be your most common mistake.
But basically, keep going.

[Foxx]

...Microsoft drive? Now that's not something I've seen before.
The download speed seems rather low, you may wanna upload it somewhere else.
And now about the forum topic... I hate that part too, but do yourself a favor and freshen up the topic a bit.
... there doesn't appear to be any official guideline regarding creation of demo topics? Any admins around..?
Well... feel free to use the other demo topics as an example.
In any case, looks like you are too eager and impatient. Put more effort into it before showing it to people.
I did find a couple of mistakes so I'm gonna attach them in a file for you.
And watch those 's, seems to be your most common mistake.
But basically, keep going.

Thanks!