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In Sugarberry’s newest project, Catnip+, you follow the story of Flicker, a quickminded shecat and member of the Swiftpaw cat colony. The Swiftpaw have been her family and closest confidants ever since the leader’s mate adopted her, and she’s been raised alongside her two fellow members Pounce and Twitch. Flicker is next in line for leadership of the colony, as the current leader Tomcat, Tusk, is aging quickly.

Flicker must protect her family and her territory from the rival cat colony Hooktooth, a group of voracious cats seeking control over the entire Sect- and willing to use any means possible to gain it.

And then of course are the Darlings, a mysterious pair of cats with no affliations. They wear strange objects around their necks that clink when they perch on windowsills, and have foreign names. Are they friends or foes?

With these two potential threats at her back, will Flicker be able to rise to power and lead her comrades? Will she be able to make peace with the rival Hooktooth colony? Will she be able to find another cat to rule by her side? Will she be able to keep Pounce from eating the humans’ pet birds again?

Find out this coming Valentines day here at Sugarberry!

Catnip+ will be completely free to download <3. Consider it Sugarberry’s Valentine’s gift to you <3!

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Swiftpaw

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One of the oldest colonies in the Sect, the Swiftpaw are a group of deft hunters and loyal protectors.

The colony is led by Tusk, a burly Tom with a great sense of duty and guidance. He leads alongside his frail mate, Gloss, who was rendered blind and infertile in a past brawl with the hateful leader of the rival Hooktooth colony, Maul.

As the pair were unable to have kittens, their only hope of continuing the Swiftpaw legacy is their charges, whom they’ve adopted into the colony, but their numbers are dwindling quickly. Their shrinking size leaves them and their territory vulnerable to invasion, making these cats immensely protective of one another. Gloss and Tuft love their charges like family, but two are aging quickly and must pass the torch soon.

Enter the charges. Flicker, Pounce, and Twitch, three cats adopted by Gloss as kittens, have been raised together and have fought together since they can remember. Next in line for the seat of Queen is bright-eyed Flicker, a young longhaired shecat who has proven herself to be an excellent leader and brilliant strategist under pressure. In order to keep the balance of leadership within the Swiftpaw colony, Flicker must soon choose a partner to lead by her side. The pickings seem slim though, with Pounce being a childish and rowdy troublemaker who won’t stop flirting with a Darling of all cats, and Twitch being aloof and distant when not on the hunt for food.

The vicious Hooktooth colony follows these cats like a ghost, and the threat of their subjugation is very real.

Will loyalty be enough for these cats to survive?

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The Hooktooth colony is a colony of ill-tempered cats who are feral and vicious in nature. Their power-hungry leader, Maul, was a former member of the Swiftpaw colony. Bitter jealousy of her brother Tusk, however, drove her to abandon her members and form a colony of her own alongside her two mates, Snipe and Jeer, but not before insuring that Swiftpaw’s power would be forever crippled, maiming Tusk’s mate to the point of infertility and permanent blindness.

Snipe has sired two kittens with Maul, a pair of beautiful young cats named Flit and Chaw. Chaw, being the eldest, is next in line for power behind her ruthless mother, and is always strict and scolding to poor little Flit, who did not inherit the family bloodlust.

Jeer, brother to Snipe, has only fathered one kitten with Maul: Quirk, a cat with odd, perfectly split markings and a sharp mind. Like Flit, however, Quirk bears no particular thirst for power or dominance, and secretly seeks to escape the colony with little half-sister Flit.

Maul’s boiling hatred for her brother and his colony will drive her to the utmost extremes to usurp his power and invade his territory, and her wicked daughter shows no sign of surrender any time soon either.

Will Flicker be able to measure up?

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Darlings

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The Darlings are a pair of cats who live with a human owner. The other cats find them strange, as they seem to want nothing to do with hunting or gathering territory. They wear glimmering, pricey collars and always have beautifully groomed fur. Being purebred, they’re foreign to the other cats and the lives of the colonies.

One Darling in particular, Lisette, has caught the eye of Pounce of the Swiftpaw colony. Her silken, perfect fur and beautiful china blue eyes are trademarks of her Ragdoll heritage, and Pounce thinks she’s the loveliest cat he’s ever seen.

Rex, her arranged mate-to-be, sees Pounce as a pest, and tries to drive him away whenever he comes near her. Rex wants nothing more than a litter of beautiful purebred kittens from Lisette, but she is shy and reluctant toward the idea. He tries to keep a dignified demeanor, but he secretly fears Lisette’s distance and growing fondness for Pounce.

What role will this pair of pampered kitties play in the power struggle between the two colonies?

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Flicker is a long-haired charge of the Swiftpaw colony. Her moniker was bestowed to honor her quick, bright mind. She is intelligent, charming, protective, and optimistic. Flicker was taken in by Gloss as a kitten, and has soft, curled, latte-colored fur and pale minty eyes. The fate of the colony rests with her, as the colony will be in danger without a Queen or Tom and their mate to lead them in these times of uncertainty against the ruthless Hooktooth colony.

Flicker was raised alongside her pair of fellow adoptees, serious Twitch and rowdy Pounce. The way things are stacking up, Flicker could have to choose between either of them for a partner…but neither seem promising, with Twitch being aloof and distant and Pounce being reckless and irresponsible.

Flicker is the colony’s top strategist as well as the most intelligent of the bunch, winning Tusk’s favor and becoming the heir to the Swiftpaw’s highest position of leadership, the Queen. She assumes somewhat of a guardian position toward her fellow charges, particularly troublemaking Pounce, and will protect her family no matter the cost.
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Kind Gloss is Tusk’s mate, serving second-in-command for Tusk as the Swiftpaw’s matron. She is blind in both of her pale, milky eyes, and has graying biscuit-colored fur. Though she is happy and devoted to her colony, her old heart mourns for her two prodigal former adoptees, Jeer and Snipe, who left she and Tusk to join the Hooktooth colony after an argument.

Gloss was once one of the most beautiful cats in the sect, lovely enough to rival even Lisette, but time and hardship has worn at her beauty. The blind cat has faced many struggles in her age, injured severely and rendered unable to bear kittens in a territory fight against Hooktooth leader Maul. Her belly is mottled with deep scars that no one, not even she, has ever seen.

The gentle cat loves her mate and her charges dearly, giving them advice and diligently observing them as they grow from afar.
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Twitch is another of Tusk’s adoptees. He has ashen gray fur with a few light patches decorating his face and extremities. Twitch is an adept hunter but tends to be more aloof toward the group, his speech limited to Flicker, instructions from Tusk, and disciplining Pounce. His eyes are a striking emerald green.

Twitch was named for his bullet-like speed in combat and swift strength. He possesses somewhat of an authoritative demeanor over Pounce, often rebuking him for the frequent misdemeanors he causes. His criticisms almost always fall shy of Flicker, however, as he respects her as the leader-to-be and admires her intelligent. Twitch, however, is unafraid of giving her advice (while often rather terse).

Twitch prefers to use action rather than words to communicate, however, and is often distant from the rest of the clan and aloof, causing Tusk to bear a streak of mistrust toward him. He advises Flicker to keep a cautious eye on Twitch, and while it pains her to doubt her close comrade, she is dutiful and follow’s his command.
Twitch will be a romanceable character in the game <3!
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Pounce is the youngest of the Swiftpaw colony, adopted by Tusk, with honey-colored eyes and a short poofy tail. His fur is short and sleek, white with deep amber patches. Pounce is curious and somewhat messy, and he gets into lots of trouble- especially with the local Darling, Lisette, whom he frequently visits despite scolding from Flicker and Twitch.

He wins the favor and interest of Lisette when she mistakes him for a purebred Japanese Bobtail, when in reality, a portion of Pounce’s tail was torn off when he was clipped by a car as a kitten. The scent of blood and panicked mewls alerted Tusk, and Pounce was immediately taken in and cared for by the Swiftpaw colony.

Pounce is an incredible jumper, hence his name, using his short tail as a boon for precise landings and trajectory during the hunt.

While he can be troublesome, mischievous and irresponsible, you’ll never find a cat more loving and optimistic than purehearted Pounce.
Pounce will be a romanceable character in the game <3!
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Tusk is an old Tom who serves as the leader of the Swiftpaw colony. He and his sister, Maul, have been warring over territories since she left the Swiftpaw colony to form her own. He is wise and stoic, with deep hazel eyes and smoky, coffee-colored, long fur.

He was born into the Swiftpaw colony alongside his sister, Maul. His efficiency during the hunt acts of bravery outdid his sister’s intelligence, earning him place as the new Swiftpaw leader. This caused his sister, cunning and spiteful Maul, to become bitterly jealous of Tusk. Enraged, she split away from the colony to form the rival Hooktooth colony, but not before severely wounding Tusk’s mate, Gloss.

Tusk is a protective leader and wise cat, who will refuse to help no cat in need. He protects his mate and charges with his life, and will always look to do what’s best to guide and provide for them.

His legacy will be carried on the shoulders of Flicker.
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Lisette, a Darling, is a beautiful cat with the softest pelt in the sect and amazing china-blue eyes. She is a showcat and model, who is pampered alongside her mate Rex. Pounce has fallen rather deeply in love with her, and often attempts to flirt with her. She mistakes his short tail for the trademark bob of a Japanese Bobtail, and thinks him to be a purebred.

She was arranged to be with her mate Rex, a fellow Ragdoll cat who is insistent that she bear his kittens so that their refined bloodline may continue, however Lisette is rather shy to the idea and feels that she has little in common with him. Her kind heart dislikes the idea of hurting him, however, and tries her best to entertain the idea of him as a suitor.

When Flicker helps Pounce in his attempts to visit Lisette, the cats form a bond that could potentially unite both aristrocrat and alleycat.

Lisette will be a romanceable character in the game!

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Rex is the second in the pair of Darlings, bred from a long line of beautiful Ragdoll cats and unsurpassed in cat shows. He is arranged to mate with Lisette to bear more beautiful kittens and continue the proud bloodline, but his many attempts to court her have thusfar been unsuccessful. He is vain, dramatic, and eccentric, and rather dislikes cats he deems to be "degenerate".
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Chaw, the first of the Hooktooth colony, is a lithe black cat with short soft fur. Her eyes are sulfur yellow, with a bitter attitude to match. She and Flicker are both up against one another in the battle for their colonies, each being the heir to their respective powers. Chaw is astranged to her younger sister, Flit, who much dislikes fighting and would rather laze around and sleep all day.

Chaw seeks to kill Flicker before she has the chance to rise to power, leaving the Swiftpaw clan without a leader and helpless. Chaw is Maul's favorite child, and makes quite sure that Flit and half-brother Quirk know it.
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Flit is the youngest of the Hooktooth colony. Her pelt is dusty gray and extremely soft, topped with short Scottish Fold ears and a short poofy tail. Flit is rather rude, and doesn't care much for violence or fighting. In fact, she seems only to care about her own pleasures, such as napping in sunbeams and batting at stray strings. Verbally abused by her sister, she tends to stay with Quirk most of the time, causing the two to form a very close bond. Still quite kittenish in demeanor, she tends to get herself in unnecessary trouble much of the time.

When she wanders too far into Swiftpaw territory and encounters Flicker for the first time, she's actually quite frightened of her and pleads for her life. Seeing that she's still rather young, however, Flicker retracts her claws and decides to question her instead. Flicker warns her that she ought to be grateful that she was the one who found her instead of Twitch, a much less merciful cat.
Flit will be a romanceable character in the game!
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Quirk is a lanky, lazy cat with split markings down his fur. He's developed quite a crush on Flicker from afar, but knows the trouble he'd get into if he'd try to approach. He can always be seen puffing on catnip, almost perpetually baked from the stuff. Flit often comments that it's stinky, having tried it once and felt entirely opposite effects, much to Quirk's amusement. Quirk is immensely protective of little Flit, often standing between she and her vitriolic sister.

Quirk often disappears to catch glimpses of Flicker in action or to go nap with Flit, and feels very little loyalty toward both his colony and his parents.

Secretly, he's scouting out a way for he and Flit to run away.

Quirk will be a romanceable character in the game!

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Maul is a battered old shecat and a former member of the Swiftpaw colony. Bitter hatred and jealousy drew her away to form her own colony when her brother rose to power. Angry that she had been outdone, she battered Tusk's mate severely, rendering her both blind and infertile. She has a pair of mates, Snipe and Jeer, in order to expand her empire. She is aging, however, and the duty is soon to fall on her daughter Chaw.

Maul is incredibly intelligent and strong, making her a hard obstacle for the Swiftpaw clan to surmount.


MORE TO COME


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Hi there! Since production was halted for The Night Circus due to the arrival of Kuroshitsuji's Book of Circus arc, I've decided to come up with a brand-new otome project! You can read all about it here, on twitter, and on the tumblr blogs http://sugarberrygames.tumblr.com/ and http://sugarberrysweet.tumblr.com/ !!!


Thank you so much for your interest n A n <3!!


I'd love any advice or feedback you have!
No design sprites posted are final, merely concepts to which changes and tweaks will and can be made.

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(1.) Does the game sound interesting so far? Would you play it?
(2.) Who's your favorite kitty so far?
(3.) Any art tips? I'm slowly trying to improve, so I can make lovely games for you all to play and share my stories.
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This is a really cute idea, but I'm a little worried about the logo. Some of the letters are rather close together, and because they're all black, the logo is a little difficult to read.
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Ah! I was wondering about that! Thank you so much n A n!

I'm really glad you like the idea q w q <3!

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UPDATE 1/18/15

Here's a quick little relationship chart I threw together, just for some more info <3. Character designs coming next!
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She’s finally here! Meet the MC for Catnip+, Flicker!

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Flicker is a long-haired charge of the Swiftpaw colony. Her moniker was bestowed to honor her quick, bright mind. She is intelligent, charming, protective, and optimistic. Flicker was taken in by Gloss as a kitten, and has soft, curled, latte-colored fur and pale minty eyes. The fate of the colony rests with her, as the colony will be in danger without a Queen or Tom and their mate to lead them in these times of uncertainty against the ruthless Hooktooth colony.

Flicker was raised alongside her pair of fellow adoptees, serious Twitch and rowdy Pounce. The way things are stacking up, Flicker could have to choose between either of them for a partner…but neither seem promising, with Twitch being aloof and distant and Pounce being reckless and irresponsible.

Flicker is the colony’s top strategist as well as the most intelligent of the bunch, winning Tusk’s favor and becoming the heir to the Swiftpaw’s highest position of leadership, the Queen. She assumes somewhat of a guardian position toward her fellow charges, particularly troublemaking Pounce, and will protect her family no matter the cost.

Next come the rest of the characters in this order: Swiftpaw, Hooktooth, Darlings. Quicker this time, I promise n A n <3!
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Next cat! Gloss of Swiftpaw!

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Kind Gloss is Tusk’s mate, serving second-in-command for Tusk as the Swiftpaw’s matron. She is blind in both of her pale, milky eyes, and has graying biscuit-colored fur. Though she is happy and devoted to her colony, her old heart mourns for her two prodigal former adoptees, Jeer and Snipe, who left she and Tusk to join the Hooktooth colony after an argument.

Gloss was once one of the most beautiful cats in the sect, lovely enough to rival even Lisette, but time and hardship has worn at her beauty. The blind cat has faced many struggles in her age, injured severely and rendered unable to bear kittens in a territory fight against Hooktooth leader Maul. Her belly is mottled with deep scars that no one, not even she, has ever seen.

The gentle cat loves her mate and her charges dearly, giving them advice and diligently observing them as they grow from afar.
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quick formatting suggestion- toss all new characters into the main post as well, guarantees everyone actually sees them when the page gets to 2+ pages.

Suggestion for Gloss- you might want to consider varying her body shape in comparison to the younger characters. When I first looked at her, I was trying to figure out what was up with her face, since her body doesn't make it obvious she is an elder. So my first thoughts were malnurished instead of age. Perhaps hunched over/shorter, wider? Another quick suggestion for her- perhaps toss her on a dark grey background, so we can see her hair better. I would also recommend darkening the lines that make up her iris, as once again the contrast difference between white and light blue is really close. You can tell what i'm, getting at if you compare Flickers tail to Gloss where Flicker has a notable outline.

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Thank you so much for the feedback <3! I'll get right on those changes.

I was worried about Gloss's eyeslashes- My biggest concern while painting up her sprite was continuity in the art- each character's brows and lashes are the deepest/warmest variation of their fur color. Her eyes are milky and discolored due to damage done in the fight with Maul. I agree they're perhaps a little /too/ light though. I'll definitely play with that.

As for her hair, I was worried about making her look too blonde rather than grayish cream. I'll experiment with the colors a bit n A n <3!

Gloss, in the game canon, /is/ quite thin because of her weak body and deteriorating health. However I'll admit her sprite is far too tall. If you're worried about body type variation, don't worry! Though the characters i've painted up thusfar are within the average-to-thin range, the game has many variations in terms of race and body types in terms of characters. One of my favorite of the routes I've written for the game involves courting an particularly adorably chubby kitty, in fact n w n <3.

Thank you so much for your tips. I'm still nosing my way around Lemma, so every little thing helps q u q <3. I'll edit the original post lickety split <3!
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Oh, by the way! If anyone has any questions over any of the cats or features of the game, please don't hesitate to ask n A n <3!
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For tonight's update, just a little wip of Pounce, but I’ve really got to sleep q w q. See you soon! Thank you so much for almost 1k views. It means more than I could ever say.
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omg....I think I had the most fun painting Pounce so far q w q...... OTL I've become so attached to these characters TT v TT
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Since I have today off due to being sick, I’d really like to put forward a thank you to everyone who has helped me get SB off its feet and expressed interest in my projects Q w Q.

From The Night Circus to Catnip+, from hiatuses to lightning-speed progress, you guys have put up with a whole bunch from me and my studio.

To you who’ve been there since the beginning, to all the new tumblr followers who make me smile, to all the sweethearts of lemmasoft, to my betas, my family, and my friends,

Thank you. For everything <3.

I never expected to come this far and learn this much, and with Catnip+’s drop date knocking on the door, I promise I’ll do my best to make you guys as happy as I possibly can. When I created this blog for the studio, I never ever expected this much love, inspiration, and advice q u n <3.

In the grand scheme of the internet, a thousand of you + a handful doesn’t really seem like much. But to me, who is all by herself in the production of these games and ideas, you are the world to me.

All of my love and gratitude,

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I don' know if you know but Tusk's information says he has deep hazel eyes. His eyes looks more green than hazel.

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Fixed <3! I'm really sorry about that, the color levels on my screen display make certain colors look a little wonky sometimes. Made them a bit more yellow-dominant! Thank you for catching that n A n!
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2- Lisette- good color combinations between fur and skin
3- Lower your eyes in nearly all your drawings, eyes are in the middle of the head. Take a ruler(press ctrl-R in photoshop) and measure the middle. Thats where the middle of the eyes should be at. Also don't count poofy hair as the top of the head, that is cheating. Below is an example of the eyes lowered, and showing how they are now centered- mostly I didn't try that hard.

The only other questionable decision in terms of art is your character heights. I'm not too certain why they are being drawn at only 4-5 heads tall, humans are typically 6-7 heads tall. To check, copy paste your heads and create a tower of heads. Your drawings are very top heavy due to their enormous heads and tiny feet, this is of course up to you as its a stylistic choice, but often when an artist isnt 100% with proportions they will use stylizing as a means to mask things. I reduced the head size by a tad, and imo it looks notably better and more cohesive as a drawing. Compare this shrunk head version to yours and decide which you prefer.

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