Lost Heroes [GxB][LoZ][NaNoRenO2015]

[doodle]

Oh, it's all fine! The only reason I didn't get it was because of that one scene, with the 3 choices. When I went back and changed it, I came on the romance path. I wasn't going for any particular ending or route, I just played it the way I wanted to, so I didn't expect to be on that path.

I guess I was just baffled that it would lead to such an abrupt "end" to their relationship, with her shooting him in the back/calf and then them not really talking anymore after the misunderstanding. I know it's because I wasn't on the romance path, but maybe a "friend"-scene in the epilogue, after speaking with Domenic, would've been nice.. I mean, it's not really necessary, I guess I just got so emotionally involved and was sad when it ended xD The romance path also brought a lot more to Kietha's character than the other one (only played "New adventure" so far).

[phoenix2899]

I laughed so much playing this game. I totally love the Legend of Zelda games, so I was interested to see where this went. The teasing between Link and Keitha was great. I think you did a fantastic job giving them both interesting and believable characters.

Even the love scenes were good- usually I wince at those as they get too sugary, but the cute awkwardness avoided that and made it much more realistic.

I'd love if the game was longer and had more options (those Zora guys are cute too, I think someone else mentioned), but I get this was not designed to be a big game. Awesome job!

[yoshibb]

@doodle Ok, yeah that makes sense.

Yeah, I wanted to imply they remained friends but it would've made sense to add another friendship scene with Link at the end. I understand what you mean

@phoenix2899 Haha, I take it as a great complement that I was able to make you laugh. I had a lot of fun with the dialogue. Thanks for playing it!

By the way guys, if you enjoyed this game I'd love it if you checked out the other game I'm currently working on here.

[SNSeed]

I honestly didn't expect to enjoy that as much as I did.
It made me laugh quite a bit and it was paced so well that I became rather engrossed in it instead of doing things I was supposed to be doing.
The heroine was very likable and you managed to make Link's personality fit him perfectly, which seems like a rather difficult task considering the guy doesn't usually talk.
Thank you for making such a good game, I started off a bit skeptical but then I really enjoyed it. ^^

[FE Girl]

I loved this game and squealed when I got the Romance cg with Link and the heroine. I wish there was more and now seeing this has inspired me to make my Hyrule Warriors Otome I plan to do I hope you make another one like this, or maybe a sequel, but good job on making this ^^

[yoshibb]

@SNSeed Glad to see that it surprised you and I hope you eventually got that work done XD
Link's personality was definitely a little hard to do because he's such a blank slate for the most part. And anytime someone has given him a chance to speak it has turned it very badly, so it's great that you thought the both of them fit their personalities well.

@FE Girl A Hyrule Warriors otome sounds awesome! I'd love to play that and it's cool that the game has inspired you. Maybe if there is enough interest I'll make a sequel someday. It would be fun being able to write more of Kietha and Link

[Qeedy]

hello!
i've played it one route and omg, i fall in love with the story. kietha's character is my favourite. the way she tease link always make me laugh.
sorry, my english is bad
but
i really enjoying play this game

[yoshibb]

@Qeedy I understand your english fine, thank you so much for the complement. I'm happy that you are enjoying the characters so much ^.^

[FE Girl]

@FE Girl A Hyrule Warriors otome sounds awesome! I'd love to play that and it's cool that the game has inspired you. Maybe if there is enough interest I'll make a sequel someday. It would be fun being able to write more of Kietha and Link

I'm currently working on the Link path, but there will be more to the game as it progresses in development. I can't stop replaying the kiss scene between Kietha and Link cause it makes me squeal >x< XD Plus, we need more Zelda VNs and I feel yours is the first I ever found for Renpy

[Heiden]

Man oh man I had the BIGGEST grin on my face when I was playing this game. I'm not super big into Zelda, but this was so CUTE and FUNNY and it felt like I was reading a really really good fanfic.

I loved the good ending where you stayed in Hyrule and were with Link and I also really liked the bad ending where you took over the country. Aaah I love endings where the MC turns evil, :'D

Congratulations on finishing and I'm looking forward to Divide!!!

Btw, is it okay if I draw fanart?

[yoshibb]

@Heiden I'm glad you were able to enjoy it even not being a Zelda fan. I really wanted to make it so everyone could play it even if they weren't Zelda fans.

And of course, I love seeing fanart! If you do end up doing something, I want to see it ^.^

[mariapizzeria]

I've been planning to make an account to review to the ridiculously awesome visual novels on this site, but as a procrastinator, that just kept getting pushed. But I digress.

The stupid stuff I wrote above this is to hopefully show you how much I appreciated this game, that I got off of my lazy butt and wrote this review that won't capture how much fun the visual novel was for me.

First off, super witty. There are several typos but they're not troubling at all. And the story's twist and turns are great.

Thanks so much for making this!

[Heiden]

I finished the fanart http://i1083.photobucket.com/albums/j38 ... osfanf.png

[yoshibb]

I finished the fanart http://i1083.photobucket.com/albums/j38 ... osfanf.png

OMG, that's awesome! I love it, thank you so much

[Kynsa]

I had overlooked this game for a while now, but at the same time I'm glad I finally did play it. Great mood booster for me! I really liked the concept of the characters as well. Not that big of a LoZ game player but the personalty you gave Link was so friggin' adorable along with Kietha's I almost squealed myself into oblivion laughing out of pure enjoyment. Another thing I really enjoyed about this was that it wasn't overly lovey dovey or anything like that, it had the right amounts of it that it felt like a real relationship happening unlike some games where in the span of a week the characters are all over each other. There were a few grammatical errors but as you said you didn't have the time to fix it all, but hopefully you can do an update soon with some CGs and more character models, I'd love to play this again just for those. All in all 5/5.