High school love game

[silentwinterland]

http://gamejolt.com/games/high-school-l ... ture/79270
if you don't know the answers you cam ask me
and....tell me what you think! XD Just want some feed
back
and dont worry bloodshed is just some textures xD
I drew them all btw

[xPerfectSuicide]

Looks cute, it will download. Did you do everything yourself?

[silentwinterland]

Ya i sure did and thanks xD

[xPerfectSuicide]

It works pretty well, let me give you a few personal tips to make your next projects a little more professional:

*The length and width of the screen. I recommend you use similar resolutions to 1280 x 720 or 1920 x 1080. New computer screens using these resolutions and it is good to maximize that; If you do not know how, I leave a small example:

In options.rpy (usually in line 24/25) you can edit this


*Modify the user interface with Imagemaps and Imagebuttons You can find a lot of examples and tutorials about this in the Ren'Py Cookbook

*Many choices are good, they are fun, but they should take a sensible character development.It is important that the viewer can feel comfortable with the characters and their history, is something that takes practice (I am not a writer so I can not say much about that)

*Music is an important tool. I learned recently, in this forum, you should read what these people said about it, your comments really help a lot to understand this. http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... =7&t=33069

Here are some personal recommendations I can give you, the game was cute, good job (especially I liked your art, has the feeling of romance)

[silentwinterland]

Thanks:)