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Take care to not burn yourself out. Looking forward to the other poses and of course as always, whatever new progress you might post next. ^_^
I was thinking that was one of the reasons as to why that happened, but I still love Deon's human form even if it's somewhat different. It suits him!Thank you! About Deon's sprite, I couldn't actually think of a good design with a bow so... yeah. I'll just use the same color instead DX
I'm glad you liked the story! It has hints of Beauty and the Beast as well. I love fairytale re tellings and I haven't read something about Goldilocks, so why not?
Oh my! I feel pressured now! I hope we won't disappoint you with their stories though //cries
You may or may not be right about your feeling! You'll find out soon when you play it XD
Thank you so much! XDPick_One wrote:Yay, colored sprites! They all look niceI like the stitching details on the brothers' clothes and the diamond pattern on Royal's clothing.
Take care to not burn yourself out. Looking forward to the other poses and of course as always, whatever new progress you might post next. ^_^
Awwww... Thank you so much! I feel more motivated now XDAkemi-Takashi wrote:
DON'T FEEL PRESSURED! You won't disappoint me either way because if it's how I expect then that means I expected it. If it's not how I expected, then the even more I want to play!I'll enjoy it no matter how it turns out because you guys worked hard on it! Plus, it's a unique story!
Oooooooooooooo! Now I really do want to play XD
Uwaaahhhh!!! Thank you so much for the wonderful comment! I'm really glad you liked what we have so far //sobs- Eris wrote:Look at those cute and adorable little bears and that gorgeous blond doll <333333333333
... I just realized that I didn't read anything at all about this project, I've been mesmerized at the adorableness, I was going to comment without knowing what I'm even talking about xD
Ok, now that I've read everything and found that you already released a demo, I'm gonna play it!
Now that I played the demo I must say I'm totally in love with the game! Everything is just lovely, the art, the BG's, the face effects and movements, it's so pretty and refreshing, 'cause not a lot of games have so much motions effects, I also love Aura's personality, she's just like me, they're all so cute I wouldn't resist and ended up punched by Miss Maria for hugging her xD
Is the story interesting enough? Will you play it once it's finished?
Yes, very very very interesting, I must say you had a great and fresh idea, congrats xD
And yes, I'm totally going to play it when it's finished! What kind of question is that? Who wouldn't want to play it? xD
Which route will you pursue first based on the character descriptions?
Deon, he doesn't look like the oldest and I must admit, I choose him more by his bear form than by his personality xD but I also like Royal too, and of course Sol, but Deon is 1st on my list.
Do you have any questions? Critiques? Feedback?
How many play hours is going to be?
Hmmmm... I have more questions but I don't want to create some spoilers or anything like that, so i'll just wait for the release xD
Feedback... hmmm... I really liked everything about it so keep up the good work, good luck and don't make us wait too long, please! xD
Well, I did say that it was inspired by Goldilocks and Beauty and the Beast, so yeah XD Thank you so much! I'm really happy you liked what we have so far //weepsCatyCats wrote:I played the demo and I love the story! To be honest, it kinda reminds me of Beauty of the beast but of course it's different! I like the choices too and I like the cg's too xD Kinda funny and realistic too. I mean, who wouldn't hug plushies if they are talking haha.
I'm looking forward to the full game. It's mysterious yet funny scenes there.
Well, I did want Aura to be a bit of a troublemaker who'll still be lovable XDPick_One wrote:Yay! I played the demo. I do like Aura's spunk, although in real life some of her actions would make me want to like reprimand her if I had to live with her.Didn't suspect that she would be this sort of a troublemaker. You did a good job with the variety of amusing expressions, I like them. I especially like all the expressions for the bears. They were all fun and cute to look at. Kept gushing over the bears' cuteness. ^///^ Really like all the bears so far. I wonder
who does Royal possibly like or find appealing? At this moment, I have an idea of who it might be. ^^ And I am curious about the toymaker.So far the game is pretty cute and amusing with the funny moments. Had a smile on as the characters interact with each other. Will you be releasing another demo? Or keep working straight to the finish line?
Oh my. That bug didn't happened to me. so I'm not really sure... (not really a programmer so.. //cries) And about the text, I noticed that too. I'll have to ask my programmer when she's not busy with school anymore. Thank you for all the comments! I'll definitely keep them in mind!Akemi-Takashi wrote:Okay, so I shall partake in viewing the demo ^_^ (This is my first time since I usually like waiting for the full version, but I want to do it for this one :3)
Okay, so it might just be me but on the main screen with the "New Game", etc. I think it should be a bit bolded but it might be just me like I said. I like the music though! XD Reminds me of a musical box.
The expressions are so cute! AND OH MY GOSH! AURA IS SUCH A TROLL XD Such a childish trollAnd when I tried saving, it didn't return to the story, just a background of the porch ;-; Is this a bug? Wait... I just pressed escape and things went back to normal, but I think I should inform you about it. AND AURA! WHY DO YOU KEEP GOING AFTER THE GRUMPY BEAR/CAT!? efwugbuiarghig
Sometimes I see the top of the letters in the next line in the text box before it appears but since the text appears fast, I didn't catch on it quickrefgjiaowjfenivpeahngoinreogibnwraonea I THINK I MADE A DISCOVERYAnd maybe add a bit of rust to the necklace? I just noticed that this story was written in present tense :3 I find it rare since I usually read in past tense. Or is it in present tense? I'm not sure if it changed midway?
and I'm somewhat of a grammar freak (I hope you don't mind if I point things out that might have already been already caught by your proofreaders ^^") so I just noticed there was no ending punctuation on this line where the Landlady says, "And that day where you poured a bucket of water on the village elder" and her next line about the old man, I think maybe it should end with a question mark? I'm so sorry. I just wanted to help out, not complain ^^"
Others:
>"I gave her a hug, thanking her for everything and then [started] marching towards my bright future."
>"I beamed my best smile and wiggled my eyebrows[.]"
>"It was a bit rusty and broken in places, but still, it was my most treasured possession[.]"
I'm enjoying the game, though, so if you want help, I'll be pleased to PM you with other things I notice?THAT GOLDEN HEART LOCKET! THEIOHTOIWERHGIEWOGRNOIVDN DON'T TELL ME IT'S-!
Hiya!! I've always been fascinated by fairy tales thus the reason why I was able to come up with this story. (I've actually written other stories about fairy tales XD) Thank you so much!!wayward wrote:Hi there. I actually became aware of visual novels last year, and I've been checking out other peoples visual novels to sort of get a sense of structure and blah blah. I like yours, love how your story feels like a fairy tale. There's a big space reserved in my heart for fairy tales and I don't think that will ever change. Also, back in the day my sister introduced me to the romance and drama genre, so I'm intrigued by the otome scene and have been checking it out for reasons--another thing that led me to this. Anyway good job and good luck with the rest of the game.
Well, I did want Aura to be a bit of a troublemaker who'll still be lovable XDFfff... It's kinda pretty obvious really OTLSadly, I won't be releasing another demo. Right now I'm focusing on finishing the whole game (I just need to finish all the artworks! DX
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