Best Friends (Friendship) (Drama) (Comedy??) (Short)+Review!

[MimirollCookie]

Hello!
This is my First Visual Novel and I hope you like it.

Best Friends

"What have I ever done to them, to deserve this?"

"There are three friends: Sakura, Len and Hirana. Sakura would never BETRAY her friends. But what if her friends betrayed her?"

Characters

She is Sakura

Sakura

Sakura always wanted to be a doctor!She has a pure heart and will never betray her friends.

Len

Len is kind to Sakura, But he kept a very dark secret.

She is Hirana

Hirana

Hirana is kind to Sakura and Len, but she did something to Sakura that Sakura would never forget

Download:
http://pastelle-studios.itch.io/best-friends
*As you can see, i change the download link
Dev notes:
*Credits are in-game *
Credits: Sprites- Konett
Background- Uncle Mugen
Music- syncopika and Alcaknight
GUI - Giovedi
We have a review from FonaCall!:
Here is the review!

Anyways thanks FonaCall!

Thanks for reading! ~~

[paradigmshifty]

Hiya. I thought I should let you know that I can't download from that link without a decryption key! Maybe you could upload it elsewhere or change the file so that a key isn't needed?

[scarlet62]

Oh this looks interesting as a first vn! I'll try to download it for now^^

[MimirollCookie]

Hi!
@paradigmshifty
Yah. My internet sucks.......
But i'm trying to post it on itch.io!
Anyways.... Thanks for reading my post!
It means a lot to me!!!

[MimirollCookie]

@scarlet62
Thank you for your kind words!
I thought i can't finish this vn because of my studies but....
YEY! I finished it!

[MimirollCookie]

New download link POSTED!!
http://pastelle-studios.itch.io/best-friends

[philip]

@MimirollCookie-

Is there a mac version?

philip

[DrSchizo]

Congratulation, it is a nice little story!

I looked at the source code and here are some tips for your next game:

1/ You don't have to call character e1, e2, e3... "s" for sakura and "l" for len might have been easier for you to remember

2/ It is possible to automaticaly import all the image. Since version 6.10, it is even simplier with a new configuration variable.

3/ It is possible to link displayed images to one character so you don't have to hide and show their sprites everytime you want to change their expression. More information here and example below:

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image sakura neutral = "Sakura_neutral.png"
image sakura blush = "Sakura_blush.png"
image sakura angry = "Sakura_angry.png"
define s = Character ('Sakura', image='sakura')

[...]

show sakura neutral
s "I'm normal."
# no need to hide sakura neutral, Ren'Py knows it is the same character and hide it automaticaly
show sakura angry
s "I'm angry."

[...]

# or even better:
show sakura neutral
s "I'm normal."
s angry "I'm angry."
s blush "I'm confused."

I should really do a tutorial about this or found one the link to since I always give the same tips

[MimirollCookie]

@philip
Hi! Since you requested I will make one!

@DrSchizo
Hi!
Thanks for your help !!!!

[MimirollCookie]

@DrSchizo
Thanks for your tip!!
I think i'm gonna use it to my next game.

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Oh! I forgot to say that the android version of the game is available!!

[MimirollCookie]

hi @philip !
I already made a mac version and i hope you like it!
(But it's still untested so if anything goes wrong just pm me!)

[philip]

@MimirollCookie-

Wow . . . that was fast; can't ask for any better service than that! I've downloaded the story, and it opens, so it appears all is well. I am hoping to be able to go through it fully later today.

Thank you!

philip

[MimirollCookie]

@philip

Thanks for downloading! I made the mac version cause i don't have anything to do
Hope you enjoy!

[MimirollCookie]

I was thinking of making a sequel....
What do you guys think?

[FonaCall]

Finally found this thread yo.

I just downloaded it earlier today, cause I saw your Guestbook entry and decided to play a game you made. Congrats on your first game! (We haven't gotten ours worked on, cause of work.)

I have a question... Would it be okay if I make a review on your game? I read it until the end and saw something about you not taking criticism or something like that and I thought it would be better if I asked you first. If anything, I won't be bashing your work. (It wouldn't make for a good review if I just complained about the things that are wrong lol.)

- Piet

PS. I'd be interested in that sequel if you made one.