Iron Mahou (magical girl, fantasy)(visual novel/RPG)
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Iron Mahou (magical girl, fantasy)(visual novel/RPG)
Discontinued- no longer a visual novel.
The project is continuing on tumblr though.
The project is continuing on tumblr though.
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Re: Iron Mahou (magical girl, fantasy)(visual novel/RPG)
This looks really interesting and I'm looking forward to it! Keep up the great work.
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Re: Iron Mahou (magical girl, fantasy)(visual novel/RPG)
The art looks very cute and the story seems rather charming, but your screenshot and descriptions have a lot of misspellings. If you don't already have a proofreader helping you, I'd really recommend getting one.
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Re: Iron Mahou (magical girl, fantasy)(visual novel/RPG)
Thanks. I appreciate that. I'm sorry the spelling was so bad, I did rush a bit. But I still have horrible spelling despite being in college. I really should write these in word first. But that would be great. Though, the series isn't far enough just yet that I need that. I'm mostly still making the assets right now.gamerbum wrote:The art looks very cute and the story seems rather charming, but your screenshot and descriptions have a lot of misspellings. If you don't already have a proofreader helping you, I'd really recommend getting one.
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Re: Iron Mahou (magical girl, fantasy)(visual novel/RPG)
I thought I had no interest in magical girls, but now I'm not sure. Your game is giving me a miniature identity crisis!
(I'm looking forward to it )
(I'm looking forward to it )
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Re: Iron Mahou (magical girl, fantasy)(visual novel/RPG)
For the purposes of getting people interested in your game, you might want to at least replace the screenshot which manages to twice use 'your' when you meant 'you're', before it gets reposted everywhere. Early screenshots sometimes get cached and continue to come up when people search for your project, which can drag people's impressions down long after the problem was actually fixed.animesock52 wrote:Thanks. I appreciate that. I'm sorry the spelling was so bad, I did rush a bit. But I still have horrible spelling despite being in college. I really should write these in word first. But that would be great. Though, the series isn't far enough just yet that I need that. I'm mostly still making the assets right now.gamerbum wrote:The art looks very cute and the story seems rather charming, but your screenshot and descriptions have a lot of misspellings. If you don't already have a proofreader helping you, I'd really recommend getting one.
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Re: Iron Mahou (magical girl, fantasy)(visual novel/RPG)
Thanks I appreciate that. I'll try and get that done when I get the chance this week.papillon wrote:For the purposes of getting people interested in your game, you might want to at least replace the screenshot which manages to twice use 'your' when you meant 'you're', before it gets reposted everywhere. Early screenshots sometimes get cached and continue to come up when people search for your project, which can drag people's impressions down long after the problem was actually fixed.animesock52 wrote:Thanks. I appreciate that. I'm sorry the spelling was so bad, I did rush a bit. But I still have horrible spelling despite being in college. I really should write these in word first. But that would be great. Though, the series isn't far enough just yet that I need that. I'm mostly still making the assets right now.gamerbum wrote:The art looks very cute and the story seems rather charming, but your screenshot and descriptions have a lot of misspellings. If you don't already have a proofreader helping you, I'd really recommend getting one.
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Re: Iron Mahou (magical girl, fantasy)(visual novel/RPG)
This looks really cool! I will definitely keep an eye on it.
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I love dark and realistic versions of magical girls Your art is very beautiful.
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Re: Iron Mahou (magical girl, fantasy)(visual novel/RPG)
Hey! If you're still lurking on this forum, I just wanted to stop by and say you have a really neat idea!
I'm also developing a Magical Girl VN based on the concept of "What would happen if Magical Girls really existed?" so I'm super excited to see how our narratives will diverge (and converge). I'm already seeing some major differences in our settings, and it just makes me even more eager to see what you do with the concept. I wonder how Crow and the gang will etch their names into Mahou Shoujo history, given how violent it turned out. Not to mention, I'm just plain curious about the world you developed in general!
Nice artwork, by the way! It's cute, but matches the dark setting well. This is a game I'll definitely be looking out for.
I'm also developing a Magical Girl VN based on the concept of "What would happen if Magical Girls really existed?" so I'm super excited to see how our narratives will diverge (and converge). I'm already seeing some major differences in our settings, and it just makes me even more eager to see what you do with the concept. I wonder how Crow and the gang will etch their names into Mahou Shoujo history, given how violent it turned out. Not to mention, I'm just plain curious about the world you developed in general!
Nice artwork, by the way! It's cute, but matches the dark setting well. This is a game I'll definitely be looking out for.
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