I got 1.1 and have a couple of things to mention:
The characters were drawn nicely, and the backgrounds have at no point bothered me or even distracted me.
The actions/activities you carry out do seem a little repetitive when narrated over and over again, but I suppose that'd help get players to try mixing it up a bit instead of just bearing down on one character :p Still, maybe there's a better way to encourage that, if that was the intent?
I agree with the above post about the proofreading. Your game would benefit greatly from it, and not because it has lots of horrible errors or anything like that. Rather, it's because most of the time the text is pretty readable to me, so that when the errors do come up, it's a little more distracting than it might be if, say, there were problems all the way through. Yes, I know that's a slightly insane thing to say, but I said it, so nyah :p
Now onto more spoilery things.
I tried it with my "here and there and almost everywhere until oh look I'm studying with only Anita" style, and got the bad ending--which is fair enough.
Then I tried focusing entirely on a single character at a time. I've gotten The Bad Ending for each of the girls with this approach. I don't know if that's intentional, but in light of the earlier bug comments, I thought I'd mention it just in case it wasn't.
When I focus on Roy (and chose Maya, for that one choice that didn't involve him), the game crashes altogether, when he reminds me that there's basketball practice. This is after one of the study sessions for the final exam, presumably on a Saturday. This is after I tell Roy about having to move again.
The traceback:
NameError: name 'true' is not defined
While running game code:
- script at line 1077 of D:\Titipan\renpy-6.3.3-full\renpy-6.3.3\Semester/game/script.rpy
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
File "C:\more\freewish\rn\th\unplayed\Semester-1.1\renpy\bootstrap.py", line 209, in bootstrap
File "C:\more\freewish\rn\th\unplayed\Semester-1.1\renpy\main.py", line 293, in main
File "C:\more\freewish\rn\th\unplayed\Semester-1.1\renpy\main.py", line 88, in run
File "C:\more\freewish\rn\th\unplayed\Semester-1.1\renpy\execution.py", line 194, in run
File "C:\more\freewish\rn\th\unplayed\Semester-1.1\renpy\ast.py", line 1117, in execute
File "C:\more\freewish\rn\th\unplayed\Semester-1.1\renpy\python.py", line 889, in py_eval
File "<none>", line 1, in <expression>
NameError: name 'true' is not defined
While running game code:
Ren'Py Version: Ren'Py 6.3.3a