Oooh, that's just as cool! ^_^Camille wrote:Right now I've coded it so that it's all black and white at first, and then Christian becomes in-color after you get any ending. Everyone else will fill in as you complete one of their endings. /o/
Where We Lay Our Scene [NaNoRenO 2016] [Commercial]
- Zelan
- Lemma-Class Veteran
- Posts: 2436
- Joined: Tue Mar 01, 2016 7:23 pm
- Completed: The Dark
- Projects: Cosplay Couple
- Tumblr: evns
- itch: Zelan
- Discord: ltnkitsuragi#7082
- Contact:
Re: Where We Lay Our Scene [NaNoRenO 2016] [Commercial]
- Lesleigh63
- Miko-Class Veteran
- Posts: 559
- Joined: Fri May 31, 2013 7:59 pm
- Completed: House of Dolls; Lads in Distress - Nano'16; Delusion Gallery Nano'18
- Projects: BL VN
- Deviantart: Lesleigh63
- Contact:
Re: Where We Lay Our Scene [NaNoRenO 2016] [Commercial]
Yeah, I picked that up from your writing extract as well but didn't know it was just directed at Christian.Camille wrote:He's really only prickly to Christian because he hates him. XD He's pretty friendly towards other people.Lesleigh63 wrote:Rainier smiling comes as a shock to me.
He looked so prickly in all his other pics.
For Auro,
Yay, a background. Can't wait to see it completed.
And I spent way too many hours watching that guy paint his backgrounds from the utube link in your twitter (awesome!!).
- Camille
- Eileen-Class Veteran
- Posts: 1227
- Joined: Sat Apr 23, 2011 2:43 pm
- Completed: Please see http://trash.moe
- Projects: the head well lost
- Organization: L3
- Tumblr: narihira
- Deviantart: crownwaltz
- itch: lore
- Contact:
Re: Where We Lay Our Scene [NaNoRenO 2016] [Commercial]
Viola's route is about done now, I just need to do a little bit more editing and then I'm getting it beta'ed. I usually don't do this for game routes but Viola is a very special case and I want to make sure I do right by her. I had a friend visiting from out of state so I wasn't as productive as usual, but I'll be throwing myself back into work now.
I come bearing another scene preview, this time from the second common route scene. It's Sacha's debut! The entire scene is posted on my premium blog, so if you have access to that then check for the day 22 entry so you can read the whole thing instead of just this snippet.
I come bearing another scene preview, this time from the second common route scene. It's Sacha's debut! The entire scene is posted on my premium blog, so if you have access to that then check for the day 22 entry so you can read the whole thing instead of just this snippet.
- Zelan
- Lemma-Class Veteran
- Posts: 2436
- Joined: Tue Mar 01, 2016 7:23 pm
- Completed: The Dark
- Projects: Cosplay Couple
- Tumblr: evns
- itch: Zelan
- Discord: ltnkitsuragi#7082
- Contact:
Re: Where We Lay Our Scene [NaNoRenO 2016] [Commercial]
oliver is such a cheesy nerd oh my goshCamille wrote:Viola's route is about done now, I just need to do a little bit more editing and then I'm getting it beta'ed. I usually don't do this for game routes but Viola is a very special case and I want to make sure I do right by her. I had a friend visiting from out of state so I wasn't as productive as usual, but I'll be throwing myself back into work now.
I come bearing another scene preview, this time from the second common route scene. It's Sacha's debut! The entire scene is posted on my premium blog, so if you have access to that then check for the day 22 entry so you can read the whole thing instead of just this snippet.
Also, I'm all of a sudden really interested by the dynamic between Christian and Viola. They seem to be really in tune with one another and I'd really like to see how that plays out in the full game!
(I love how this was a scene focused on Sacha and I talked about everyone besides her and her brother whoops)
- Auro-Cyanide
- ssǝʇunoƆ ʇɹ∀
- Posts: 3059
- Joined: Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:02 am
- Completed: http://auro-cyanide.tumblr.com/visualnovels
- Projects: Athena
- Organization: Cyanide Tea
- Tumblr: auro-cyanide
- Deviantart: Auro-Cyanide
- Location: Melbourne, Australia
- Contact:
Re: Where We Lay Our Scene [NaNoRenO 2016] [Commercial]
Been working on a background, it's mostly done but I still want to refine the lighting and colours a bit.
- Lesleigh63
- Miko-Class Veteran
- Posts: 559
- Joined: Fri May 31, 2013 7:59 pm
- Completed: House of Dolls; Lads in Distress - Nano'16; Delusion Gallery Nano'18
- Projects: BL VN
- Deviantart: Lesleigh63
- Contact:
Re: Where We Lay Our Scene [NaNoRenO 2016] [Commercial]
Ooh, I like your colour scheme.
My suggestions (feel free to toss them in the bin)
The brown building could use a little more colour - maybe make the drain pipes and gutters green or something, change the colour of the windows wood bits and maybe add a few lines of bright light on the glass if it's in direct sunlight.
I feel my eyes pulling to the left - maybe make the shadows on the builing on the right (the arch and near the door) much darker.
But looking good.
My suggestions (feel free to toss them in the bin)
The brown building could use a little more colour - maybe make the drain pipes and gutters green or something, change the colour of the windows wood bits and maybe add a few lines of bright light on the glass if it's in direct sunlight.
I feel my eyes pulling to the left - maybe make the shadows on the builing on the right (the arch and near the door) much darker.
But looking good.
- Camille
- Eileen-Class Veteran
- Posts: 1227
- Joined: Sat Apr 23, 2011 2:43 pm
- Completed: Please see http://trash.moe
- Projects: the head well lost
- Organization: L3
- Tumblr: narihira
- Deviantart: crownwaltz
- itch: lore
- Contact:
Re: Where We Lay Our Scene [NaNoRenO 2016] [Commercial]
Oliver tries so hard, bless him. :'( I'm glad that you're interested in their dynamic! I think that will play out interestingly from route to route, for sure.Zelan wrote:oliver is such a cheesy nerd oh my gosh
Also, I'm all of a sudden really interested by the dynamic between Christian and Viola. They seem to be really in tune with one another and I'd really like to see how that plays out in the full game!
(I love how this was a scene focused on Sacha and I talked about everyone besides her and her brother whoops)
I've officially finished Viola's route! If you are trans or LGBTA with experience writing/beta’ing and would like to read through it and give us your comments, please let me know. The common route + Viola’s route is about 16,000 words. If you do this, we’ll give you a free copy of the game and everything related to it. I normally don’t have time to get my NaNoRenO stuff edited, it’s done so last-minute, but I really want to do right by Viola. I did my research and tried to be sensitive, but I’m not trans myself, so there’s a limit to my own understanding.
Anyway, let me know! We're doing this through Google Docs, as you’re just reading through the script.. /o/
- Auro-Cyanide
- ssǝʇunoƆ ʇɹ∀
- Posts: 3059
- Joined: Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:02 am
- Completed: http://auro-cyanide.tumblr.com/visualnovels
- Projects: Athena
- Organization: Cyanide Tea
- Tumblr: auro-cyanide
- Deviantart: Auro-Cyanide
- Location: Melbourne, Australia
- Contact:
Re: Where We Lay Our Scene [NaNoRenO 2016] [Commercial]
@Lesleigh, thanks for the feedback! I added in some colour to the far building and I'm still working on the colours of light/shadow... I'm thinking I might pull the editing back all together but I'll handle that later.
The reason this BG is so long is because it will basically function as two backgrounds, one for the movie set and one for the filming set.
I also made a GIF of the process
I think next up I will work on this one, it will be a base and then I will make variations so one will be Christian's and the other will be Rainier's.
The reason this BG is so long is because it will basically function as two backgrounds, one for the movie set and one for the filming set.
I also made a GIF of the process
I think next up I will work on this one, it will be a base and then I will make variations so one will be Christian's and the other will be Rainier's.
- Nayru774
- Regular
- Posts: 120
- Joined: Thu Sep 03, 2015 5:25 pm
- Completed: SoulSet, Blankspace
- Projects: The Elevator Game with Catgirls
- Tumblr: NoBreadStudio
- itch: nobreadstudio
- Location: Poland
- Contact:
Re: Where We Lay Our Scene [NaNoRenO 2016] [Commercial]
Ooh, this looks very promising! I'm in love with your GUI and I adore your character designs (so many outfits!) :3 Those backgrounds are amazing, as well!
I'm definitely looking forward to playing this! Best of luck to you guys! ヽ(*・ω・)ノ
I'm definitely looking forward to playing this! Best of luck to you guys! ヽ(*・ω・)ノ
- Lesleigh63
- Miko-Class Veteran
- Posts: 559
- Joined: Fri May 31, 2013 7:59 pm
- Completed: House of Dolls; Lads in Distress - Nano'16; Delusion Gallery Nano'18
- Projects: BL VN
- Deviantart: Lesleigh63
- Contact:
- Auro-Cyanide
- ssǝʇunoƆ ʇɹ∀
- Posts: 3059
- Joined: Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:02 am
- Completed: http://auro-cyanide.tumblr.com/visualnovels
- Projects: Athena
- Organization: Cyanide Tea
- Tumblr: auro-cyanide
- Deviantart: Auro-Cyanide
- Location: Melbourne, Australia
- Contact:
Re: Where We Lay Our Scene [NaNoRenO 2016] [Commercial]
@ Nayru and Lesleigh, Thank you!
Super tired so I need to go to bed!
This isn't a finished background, it's just a base. I'm going to add a bunch of variations to make it 2 backgrounds, one for Christian and one for Rainier. Lighting is still up in the air while I figure out what I want.
Also kind of started this one so you can see how weird everything looks in the beginning stages
Super tired so I need to go to bed!
This isn't a finished background, it's just a base. I'm going to add a bunch of variations to make it 2 backgrounds, one for Christian and one for Rainier. Lighting is still up in the air while I figure out what I want.
Also kind of started this one so you can see how weird everything looks in the beginning stages
- Lesleigh63
- Miko-Class Veteran
- Posts: 559
- Joined: Fri May 31, 2013 7:59 pm
- Completed: House of Dolls; Lads in Distress - Nano'16; Delusion Gallery Nano'18
- Projects: BL VN
- Deviantart: Lesleigh63
- Contact:
Re: Where We Lay Our Scene [NaNoRenO 2016] [Commercial]
I like what you've done so far.
Textures are working well.
Textures are working well.
- Auro-Cyanide
- ssǝʇunoƆ ʇɹ∀
- Posts: 3059
- Joined: Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:02 am
- Completed: http://auro-cyanide.tumblr.com/visualnovels
- Projects: Athena
- Organization: Cyanide Tea
- Tumblr: auro-cyanide
- Deviantart: Auro-Cyanide
- Location: Melbourne, Australia
- Contact:
Re: Where We Lay Our Scene [NaNoRenO 2016] [Commercial]
@Lesleigh, Thank you! I was actually planning on matte painting more, like I did with The Blind Griffin ones, but I seem to just be painting over them more hahaha
I'm pretty happy with how this one turned out so far, baring some more colour editing!
I'm pretty happy with how this one turned out so far, baring some more colour editing!
- Lesleigh63
- Miko-Class Veteran
- Posts: 559
- Joined: Fri May 31, 2013 7:59 pm
- Completed: House of Dolls; Lads in Distress - Nano'16; Delusion Gallery Nano'18
- Projects: BL VN
- Deviantart: Lesleigh63
- Contact:
Re: Where We Lay Our Scene [NaNoRenO 2016] [Commercial]
I love the details you're putting on the buildings.
- Auro-Cyanide
- ssǝʇunoƆ ʇɹ∀
- Posts: 3059
- Joined: Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:02 am
- Completed: http://auro-cyanide.tumblr.com/visualnovels
- Projects: Athena
- Organization: Cyanide Tea
- Tumblr: auro-cyanide
- Deviantart: Auro-Cyanide
- Location: Melbourne, Australia
- Contact:
Re: Where We Lay Our Scene [NaNoRenO 2016] [Commercial]
@Lesleigh, Hahaha, thank you XD Most of the details are actually just a bunch of messy squiggles
This is an actual location in Milan, the Parco Sempione! The structure in the background is the Arco della Pace. It's origins were the gateway to Milan.
This is an actual location in Milan, the Parco Sempione! The structure in the background is the Arco della Pace. It's origins were the gateway to Milan.
Who is online
Users browsing this forum: No registered users