So, I will put it here! (<- awkward resolve)
Edited : spot a lot of mistake and missing sentence. Embarrassing indeed. ; _ ;
On topic, There are two story.
1. The Loner's sky
Premise: Protagonist trapped in the world where other human, animal, animated livings have disappeared.
He then found other 3 person, each one problematic on their own. Ranging from bullies victim girl, social rejected teenager, and woman who has her heart closed.
Turns out he is the only one who got cut out from the world, and he can interact with only the three at their specific place and time.
All of them has a hint on what brought him to this isolated world, which he hope finding that out will return him to 'the normal world'.
Longer summary can be found below:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-5y ... sp=sharing.
- Main project that I am aiming at finishing it first.
- This story contains suicide (being the main theme) , violent and heavy issue.
- An idea of happy ending here is questionable. (the reason tagged spoiler at the end of section)
- If there's no destructive ending where murder and violent occurs, it's because I'm gutless ; _ ;
- The core premise was built from my scrapped theory I had when played Cross+Channel. Used to have more character (5:5 male to female ratio) before got scale down into this.
The ending can't be explained without being spoiler. I'll put it short in spoiler tag below.
- Character's end is suicide ending, where the one you witness her suicide will stay with you. Convincing them out of suicide will result in they getting 'disconnected' from your world.
- Story ending (True ending?) is when you successfully disconnected all of them.
- Violent ending is what you get when choosing 'impulsive choice' enough time. Basically bad ending to clarify what protagonist's 'monster' looks like.
- There is fallback ending when you fulfill the condition. (Still have to sort through all possibilities.)
2. The Rules project (Temporary name)- Story ending (True ending?) is when you successfully disconnected all of them.
- Violent ending is what you get when choosing 'impulsive choice' enough time. Basically bad ending to clarify what protagonist's 'monster' looks like.
- There is fallback ending when you fulfill the condition. (Still have to sort through all possibilities.)
Premise: Story of inevitable. A girl with trap-manipulating power forced into fighting for survival against the magic users in an underground basement she used to play with her deceased twin brother.
Unknown to her are the vengeful force plotting a revenge with her as a pawn, and her inability to seeks a help will result in the large-scale tragedy once the town's dark secrets come into play.
About story:
- Largely influenced by Tecmo's deception. This story wouldn't be written if only Tecmo didn't went Erotic route....but ends up borrow nothing from it aside from trap-triggering protagonist.
- Linear story with bad ending now and then. (The more of showing 'what could've been (worse)' than 'Choices and Consequences')
- Reward after each fight, is 'temporary peace' where she'll get a chance to make friend, finds an information or improves her skill.
- Overall plot can be simplified as Tragedy -> Rebirth -> Overcoming the monster
- This too has story planned from the beginning to the end.
On more personal notes:
- It has larger casts and longer story, intended to be 'Escape project' for be to run away from The Loner's sky depressing tone and went back.
- The point is having what I can keep writing a bit by bit.
- Being fantasy , it's great excuse for experimenting visual effect and all narrative gimmicks.
- .......Only reason I felt this is still brighter than the first is I accustomed to the cast to the point of stopped being hurt when writing depressing scene with them.
- At the cost of escape from depressing story, the amounts of research about ranged from tabletop game to 80~90s western culture and its history really challenges my Asian-mentality o _ o''. My JRPG-based knowledge turned into a pile of dust now.
The largest neck bottle is my writing... being half-fluent in my own native language, Japanese and somewhat below average in English. My rough draft contains all of them.
Hope I can choose one single language when I do rewriting. T _ T
Recently stepped into English-language community, I really have no idea what other person will think with this premise.
My attempts to pin down the genre returns nothing but completely different story, if you saw any story that resemble these...or even merely speak what you think while reading the premise, or commenting on my grammar and my gratitude will be with you.