Tale of puppet [otome][GxB][romance|19th century|steampunk]

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Zelan
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Re: Tale of puppet [otome][GxB][romance|19th century|steampu

#16 Post by Zelan »

"however possess" should be "however she possesses" and the last sentence should change "but sometimes" to "and usually" - otherwise, you're golden. ^_^
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#17 Post by heerokun »

Zelan wrote:"however possess" should be "however she possesses" and the last sentence should change "but sometimes" to "and usually" - otherwise, you're golden. ^_^
Thank you Zelan :)

"However possess" should be "however she possesses"
Thank you so much for reflecting your advice.
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Re: Tale of puppet [otome][GxB][romance|19th century|steampu

#18 Post by heerokun »

It has been a long time. ^^
Do you all get along well?
We are making hard work.
Expect it.

Thank you :)
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#19 Post by LizardRobot »

Keep at it! ^^
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Re: Tale of puppet [otome][GxB][romance|19th century|steampu

#20 Post by SkinMedley »

This looks really really interesting!!! The art is GORGEOUS and the characters are super interesting.

And the dialogues lolol... "You are my meal grr" (OMG LMAO I'M DYING)

I'm really looking forward to this! Fighting!
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