So I went through the demo a few days ago and aside from a few nitpicks (actually they aren't even that...it's more confusions and just general subjective likes) I was very intrigued by the story~! It left me wanting more and I was rooting for the heroine and wanting to get to know the cast of deer even more.
...except for Comet. What a miserable character. Sorry. lol. I know he's supposed to be stubborn and serious, but he just comes across as rude, uncaring, vengeful, conceited, wrathful...just awful.
Perhaps he warms up to us later...but I don't even have the care or want to defrost his heart. Maybe you've something grand planned which will unveil his softer side but for right now...I can say I actually *HATE* his personality. And I don't use that word often.
I also was confused at first with the 2 different usages of mom/mama. I found it hard to attach which name with which title. Eventually I got it though.
Last thing,
how does she keep track of chasing that 1 singular snowflake in the forest despite there being a blizzard and a thousand other snowflakes blowing about in a chaotic manner?