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Crunchy Lunch [Comedy][NaNo 2018]

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Crunchy Lunch is a comedy VN about when you take your lunch to work and IT'S SO LOUD THAT EVERYONE ELSE IN THE OFFICE HEARS IT!!!

DOWNLOAD HERE AT ITCH.IO

It was created in 30 days for the game jam NaNoRenO 2018, using pen, paper, sticky notes, and a smartphone camera.

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Thanks for playing!









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#2 Post by PMscenarios »

This was cute and I really liked the presentation. I was smiling the whole way through.
Congrats on another successful game release! :)
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PMscenarios wrote: Mon Apr 02, 2018 4:01 am This was cute and I really liked the presentation. I was smiling the whole way through.
Congrats on another successful game release!
Hey, thanks for playing! Handwriting all of those sticky notes was a bit of a pain, but I really enjoyed putting it all together.

Congrats to you for your NaNo release too!!

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So creative! I loved it! :)
Just wished it was lingerie but it must have been a pain in the butt to make!

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Godline wrote: Fri Apr 13, 2018 7:22 am So creative! I loved it! :)
Just wished it was lingerie but it must have been a pain in the butt to make!

Thanks!!

If you're looking for lingerie games, you might want to check out the 18+ boards, haha. (Although I'm guessing that was an autocorrect typo :) ).

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YossarianIII wrote: Tue Apr 17, 2018 6:22 pm
Godline wrote: Fri Apr 13, 2018 7:22 am So creative! I loved it! :)
Just wished it was lingerie but it must have been a pain in the butt to make!
Thanks!!

If you're looking for lingerie games, you might want to check out the 18+ boards, haha. (Although I'm guessing that was an autocorrect typo :) ).
Probably meant longer :')

I left a comment on your itch.io game page a while back. I was following you since your post in the NaNoWiP

This is a great execution of a simple idea. It's concise, has good short-hand humor, and has a kind of 'business' rush feeling to it.

I think you smashed your goal and I hope you're proud.
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78909087 wrote: Wed Apr 18, 2018 8:18 am
Probably meant longer :')

I left a comment on your itch.io game page a while back. I was following you since your post in the NaNoWiP

This is a great execution of a simple idea. It's concise, has good short-hand humor, and has a kind of 'business' rush feeling to it.

I think you smashed your goal and I hope you're proud.

Hey, thanks for taking the time to leave a comment here too! It really helps!!

I was really excited when I came up with the idea because I knew it'd be a perfect fit for something like NaNo. Glad you enjoyed it! :D

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A real unique and fun game, hooking me right away by being so different from the average VN. And the story too was so simple yet relateable and funny. Really enjoyed playing this!
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Mammon wrote: Sat Apr 21, 2018 12:21 pm A real unique and fun game, hooking me right away by being so different from the average VN. And the story too was so simple yet relateable and funny. Really enjoyed playing this!
Thanks, Mammon! :) I've always really enjoyed trying to take simple ideas and then execute them well!

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#10 Post by paradigmshifty »

great game! i was wondering where the story could possibly go with that initial premise!
the execution was very good indeed (gotta love that pen cursor!!)

i made a couple bootlegs of the music https://soundcloud.com/sleepyagents/set ... it-crunchy
hope you don't mind ^^

1 with some drum samples too, the other is 100% crunchy lunch samples and fx
so crunchy
current project - Departure Lounge
past projects at sleepyagents.itch.io <3 website/blog at http://www.sleepyagents.co.uk <3 collabs etc. listed at projects.sleepyagents.co.uk/all/ <3
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YossarianIII wrote: Tue Apr 17, 2018 6:22 pm
Godline wrote: Fri Apr 13, 2018 7:22 am So creative! I loved it! :)
Just wished it was lingerie but it must have been a pain in the butt to make!

Thanks!!

If you're looking for lingerie games, you might want to check out the 18+ boards, haha. (Although I'm guessing that was an autocorrect typo :) ).
HAHAHAHA! I don't even know how it got 'longer' into 'lingerie'.
But maybe both is accurate.

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paradigmshifty wrote: Tue May 01, 2018 12:00 pm great game! i was wondering where the story could possibly go with that initial premise!
the execution was very good indeed (gotta love that pen cursor!!)

i made a couple bootlegs of the music https://soundcloud.com/sleepyagents/set ... it-crunchy
hope you don't mind ^^

1 with some drum samples too, the other is 100% crunchy lunch samples and fx
so crunchy
These are amazing!!! Thanks so much for sharing these! It's really interesting to hear how you were able to use all those sound effects.

Yes, in general I'm cool with any sort of remix, adaptation, Let's Play, etc. of my stuff. As long as you're not incorporating my work into, like, cigarette ads or something, you're probably good! :)

Godline wrote: Tue May 01, 2018 10:17 pm HAHAHAHA! I don't even know how it got 'longer' into 'lingerie'.
But maybe both is accurate.
lol, sometimes autocorrect really has a mind of its own.

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#13 Post by M.Knight »

Hello!

I just finished Crunchy Lunch. It had a very original presentation, and it was quite funny! Crazy how you can be so humourous with nothing more than a bunch of post-it notes.
My favorite part has to be
the imagined flash-forward and its somewhat morbid humor

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#14 Post by Sayumi101 »

Oh goodness, if this ain't the definition of short and sweet. Loved the tone of the writing and the crunchiness in general.

Gave me war flashback of the time a classmate and I opened her lunch to see what she brought and flooded our classroom with the smell of chicken... in geography class.

Anyways, loved the uniqueness! Looking forward to more of your releases!
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