Visual novel help ;-;

[StarsongKG]

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I'm sorry, but errors were detected in your script. Please correct the
errors listed below, and try again.


File "game/script.rpy", line 29: menu statement expects a non-empty block.
    menu:
        ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 33: Line is indented, but the preceding say statement statement does not expect a block. Please check this line's indentation.
    "I Agree" :
    ^

Ren'Py Version: Ren'Py 6.99.14.3.3347
Sat May 05 18:29:41 2018

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    menu:
    
    "Anxiety, Depression, Suicidal thoughts, self-harm, foul lauguage, bullying, "
    
        "I Agree" :
        
        "Loading Rebecca's Route"
        
        "I Disagree" :
         
         "Goodbye"
         
  
   
label after_menu:    
    

and if i indent Menu it wants me to not do it

[kivik]

The problem isn't the menu line, but the line after the menu. Menu is a block, so everything inside the menu block needs to be indented:

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    menu:
        "Anxiety, Depression, Suicidal thoughts, self-harm, foul lauguage, bullying, " # caption for the menu choice block, needs to be indented!
        "I Agree" :
            "Loading Rebecca's Route" # this needs indenting as well, as it's part of the I agree block
        "I Disagree" :
            "Goodbye" #indent this too, because it's part of disagree block

[StarsongKG]

o
Mk! fixed!

[StarsongKG]

How do i change the name of my game?

[kivik]

Have a look in options.rpy

[StarsongKG]

How do i add music?

[Imperf3kt]

Please consider reading the documentation for such questions. It is very easy to follow for your last two questions.

But, to be helpful:

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define audio.some_word = "myfile.wav"

label start:
    play music some_word

Use almost whatever you like in place of "some_word"
You can find more on playing music and other sound files, here:
https://www.renpy.org/doc/html/audio.html
Or take a look at the demo tutorial game included with Ren'Py

[StarsongKG]

My iicharacter_alpha wont work ;-;. (The Ren'py character creator) And i cant download my models

[kivik]

That's not affiliated with official Renpy, you'll have to talk to the creator of the program about it.

[StarsongKG]

O.. kk

[kivik]

You can use a solid colour as an image and put it on the transient layer or something:

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image overlay blood = Solid("#ff0000aa") # hex colour 6 digits + alpha 2 digits

...

show overlay blood

Adjust the last 2 hex decimal digits (from 00 to ff) to change the opacity.

[StarsongKG]

Okay im really confused. Does anyone have skype, It will be really easy to show and understand (me understanding you guys) what im doing wrong. ergergerr




Its only rare when we get this number..

kivik
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[StarsongKG]

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I'm sorry, but errors were detected in your script. Please correct the
errors listed below, and try again.


File "game/script.rpy", line 295: Line is indented, but the preceding say statement statement does not expect a block. Please check this line's indentation.
    menu:
    ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 816: Line is indented, but the preceding say statement statement does not expect a block. Please check this line's indentation.
    menu:
    ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 828: Line is indented, but the preceding say statement statement does not expect a block. Please check this line's indentation.
    menu:
    ^

Ren'Py Version: Ren'Py 6.99.14.3.3347
Fri Jun 08 13:07:41 2018

The bottom 2 errors, are from me trying to make a menu inside a menu. I did it once, and it worked. but ever since I did it again, it's giving me errors! Im trying to have multiple endings, 1 suicide, the rest, Living. And it will continue if you pick the living ones, but people say different things depending on what choices you choose. Il probably will be bashed about how dumb im being.

[kivik]

If you read the error message (quite often it tells you exactly what's wrong ).

Let's break this one down:
Line is indented
It's saying you've indented the line menu:

but the preceding say statement statement does not expect a block
Your previous statement is a say statement. Say statement isn't a block, so what goes after it should not be indented. Blocks are code that has a block starting statement (e.g. menu:), and children statements that goes underneath - which are indented. Say statement isn't a block, so you don't indent what comes after it.

Please check this line's indentation.
Check your line's indentation (but make sure you check the children lines)

[StarsongKG]

Thanks! sorry for being a burden