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Re: Jack-In-A-Castle [NaNo2019] [BxB, Fantasy]

#1 Post by Syrale »

This looks very good so far, I love your art style!
Both LIs seem very cute and cheeky, but I REALLY like Bunnie's design, so I think he's my favorite.
Can't wait to see what they all look like in color!

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#2 Post by nerupuff »

The menu! The background! The sprite sketches! They're all so CUTE! I love them, I love them all. I am so excited for this and I hope you'll be able to finish! I cannot wait for Jack to be colored (because I will definitely go for him). Those eyes just really get me.
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Re: Jack-In-A-Castle [NaNo2019] [BxB, Fantasy]

#3 Post by azaraih »

Wow, I love the art style on this! The background image of the castle is great, the colors on it are just really pleasing to look at. So far I think I like Jack the best, but I'm interested to find out more about everyone. Good luck with your game!
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Re: Jack-In-A-Castle [NaNo2019] [BxB, Fantasy]

#4 Post by Amiralo »

Jack. The fact he's a temporary ruler makes me wonder what he did to become king in the first place haha.

Love the art. Can't wait for the game to come out.
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Re: Jack-In-A-Castle [NaNo2019] [BxB, Fantasy]

#5 Post by Zelan »

Oh, wow!! Same thing that everyone above has already said but I really love the art style for both the sprites and the backgrounds! It's really unique, your VN definitely stands out with it.

It's really impressive that you've already written and coded so much of the story! Good luck on your NaNo, I'm excited to see more updates!

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#6 Post by Warden »

The art style is very interesting and not something seen often in VN's so I'm super excited to check it out when you release it! I'm probably most interested in Jack at the moment because there's something about landmine personalities that just draw me in. :P Good luck!
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#7 Post by LateWhiteRabbit »

Welcome to the forums!

I absolutely adore your art style. Great color and designs.

I have to say that I love any character design where the sleeves are longer than the person's arms, but I'd probably pursue the Bunnie route. Something about chasing rabbits....
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#8 Post by nerupuff »

Awesome backgrounds! It's pretty nifty to use color adjustments to make a background show what sort of time is going-on. Your BGs are so fun-looking and dynamic! Will those candles on the window sill ever light up?
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Re: Jack-In-A-Castle [NaNo2019] [BxB, Fantasy]

#9 Post by minyan »

I'm really digging this art style. I can't pick a favorite design, they're all so cute. And don't make me choose between Jack or Bunnie. I have to do both Dx

That BG looks amazing too! Keep up the great work!
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Re: Jack-In-A-Castle [NaNo2019] [BxB, Fantasy]

#10 Post by Zelan »

nerupuff wrote: Sun Mar 10, 2019 7:45 am Awesome backgrounds! It's pretty nifty to use color adjustments to make a background show what sort of time is going-on. Your BGs are so fun-looking and dynamic! Will those candles on the window sill ever light up?
They do look like different times! I agree with nerupuff, I think it would be extra clear if the candles were lit in the nighttime BG, since that's when they're usually used. Amazing work, keep it up!

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Re: Jack-In-A-Castle [NaNo2019] [BxB, Fantasy]

#11 Post by Wight »

Wow, I'm really digging these backgrounds! It's like a whimsical storybook, which I would say works really well with the character concepts you introduced so far and the Fantasy theme you tagged it as. Even if you think it might be too cartoony, I definitely wouldn't say it's a bad thing.
Even if they're all dudes, they're still cuties. It's a tough choice choosing between Bunnie and Jack. Bunnie immediately catches my interest for being the bigger cutie, but I really wonder about Jack's personality and how he handles being the temporary king.

It looks like you're making great progress so far, keep it up! You got this!

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#12 Post by nyphren »

i'm in love with your art style!! it's so original and pleasant to look at!
can't wait to try out your game. good luck!

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Re: Jack-In-A-Castle [NaNo2019] [BxB, Fantasy]

#13 Post by Zelan »

Agreeing with Wight that Bunnie is hands down the cuutest character here, but Jack definitely still catches my interest! I love all of the backgrounds. ^_^ Super excited to play the finished version!

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Re: Jack-In-A-Castle [NaNo2019] [BxB, Fantasy]

#14 Post by Cotton Blue »

I loved Bunnie's design! It's definitely my first choice.

I look forward to the final result <3
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#15 Post by keelan »

Congrats!! I've been stalking the NaNo threads and thought this one was super cute. I'm glad to see it's done~

I'll download it right now and put it in my NaNo2019 folder, so I can binge games come April. Great job! I'll leave a review once I give it a go <3

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