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I made a demo copy of the VN I've been working on.
Its a slice of life short game about a girl named Eir who is as I put it a hot mess masquerading as a human being. She's an executive art director who is great at running other peoples lives and managing projects but is terrible in her own life. The games plot centers around her losing her bag on a New York City train and the boy who finds it and is trying to reunite her with her things and the stumbling blocks they face.
I would like feedback on the pacing of the story (even though its relatively short is it interesting?) Any critique to help me improve my game. As well as any suggestions you'd like to make.
I haven't downloaded the demo yet (I tend to wait until the full game is out), but the premise is really interesting and original, plus the character art is pretty pretty. Can't wait to see the full game!
Rinima wrote: ↑Fri Sep 20, 2019 5:18 am
I haven't downloaded the demo yet (I tend to wait until the full game is out), but the premise is really interesting and original, plus the character art is pretty pretty. Can't wait to see the full game!
Thanks! I hope to have the full game out by the end of the year barring any catastrophic failures.
