ebi-hime wrote:I noticed the characters have a tendency to use a lot of exclamation marks when talking, though, so everybody sounds really excited and/or surprised all the time... which I thought was kind of cute, but maybe didn't help the creepy atmosphere so much n_n;;
Also, sometimes the writing is a bit... forced, maybe? Like, the characters have a habit of giving their whole life story rather easily, and sometimes talk out loud using metaphors/similies and very 'flowery'/overly formal language that isn't really that common for high school students?
Thank you for your comments, ebi
. There's at least one character (Naomi) who talks using an overly formal language, but that was intentional. Everything else is because I'm a Portuguese native speaker, and I've learned English from books only.
On the TNH beta thread I once declared that "Toire No Hanako is an OELVN with a heavy foreign accent"
Ran08 wrote:Hmmm, haven't I played this before?
Is this a new version or something Donmai?
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It's basically the version you played before, with better sound,
a lot of text corrections, two or three CG's redone and a music room added. I'm currently working on another project, 'Slumberland'. I put a demo
here, but it haven't attracted too much attention
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