Honest Feedback, I've been drawing for 12 years

[Mary Li]

Hi everyone! I dropped all my projects after some personal issues, but I had a prologue for my VN (it's otome, but guys will enjoy it as well, I assure you!)
BUT I have not been drawing for a long time. I got to make this quick sketch of the female lead (yes, she's meant to be really hot and pretty) but I'm not so confident in my skills anymore. Also, my wacom died and that actually helped, because I started with the wacom when I saw this digital niche. I'm extremely bad with wacoms...
I think the clothes she's wearing are really blank, yes, but it's a skecth and I didn't want to think about the little details for now.
Please, I need advices. I want her to be really pretty. Also I don't want her to have the typical thin body so it's new to me drawing thicc girls hehe but I'm really happy to finally do it.
Thanks in advance! (her mole is good up her eyes? I think a mole in the mouth has been used too much...)

[fleet]

I like the sketch, but if she is supposed to be thicc, I think she should be more voluptuous (full-figured body, specifically a larger butt and curvy waist).

[CaseyHamilton]

I liked it, good work.

[Mary Li]

I like the sketch, but if she is supposed to be thicc, I think she should be more voluptuous (full-figured body, specifically a larger butt and curvy waist).

Right! yeah, maybe I will make her ass stand a bit more. I dont want her to be too voluptuous tho!
Thank you for the advice!
Is it me, or her hands look... I don't know... stiff? Or am I being too picky?

[fleet]

Her hands look okay to me.