I've been revising it the last few days. The pacing is feeling off to me. Maybe it's just because it hasn't been programmed yet, so I don't know what kind of pauses there will be, but things are feeling too fast. I think some of the scenes were too short, so I've been expanding them.
Buuut I'm also considering something else.....
I think adding gameplay could help the pacing, but I'm not sure if I'll do it or not. Episode 1 wasn't written with this kind of interactivity in mind, so it might feel incongruent. On the other hand, I DO love point & click mechanics, and I DO want some more experience making them, and it would be a lot of fun... I can't decide
But I know I need to work on drawing CGs and redrawing menus, so I'll focus on that for now haha. I'll try to show you some CG sketches soon!!
((I've still been posting things on Tumblr as well, like I recently shared a gif of a "talking animation" I tested out with Aloysius hahah ))