My first game, Another Day
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My first game, Another Day
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Re: My first game, Another Day
for Windows only
All ages
Duration: not too long
Music: Yes
Website: nope
All ages
Duration: not too long
Music: Yes
Website: nope
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Re: My first game, Another Day
I keep getting an error when I try to run the file, but I think I know the problem!
When you completed the game, did you go to Tools: Build Distribution? That should compile the game into a zip folder (And Mac and Linux equivalent)), which should be put up for download instead of just the .exe. Putting the .exe by itself doesn't do anything, it needs the other files.
Unless you built an installer for it, which would be only an .exe, but based on the size, I don't think that's what you did.
When you completed the game, did you go to Tools: Build Distribution? That should compile the game into a zip folder (And Mac and Linux equivalent)), which should be put up for download instead of just the .exe. Putting the .exe by itself doesn't do anything, it needs the other files.
Unless you built an installer for it, which would be only an .exe, but based on the size, I don't think that's what you did.
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Re: My first game, Another Day
Big piles of music! (Sadly, copyrighted, as are the graphics I assume, which will keep it off the Renai archives)
It's kind of confusing with the way graphics are layered together. Constantly fading from 'hospital bed' to 'fullscreen picture of girl' makes me feel dizzy.
Finding good art is a challenge everybody faces, and the best some people can hope for is to have their art be not too distracting to prevent people from enjoying the story. Unfortunately for me, the different graphics sources and the constant shifting fades *were* too distracting. I can't remember much of anything about the game except that dizzy feeling.
I'd suggest slowing down, writing more descriptions and feelings, and not trying to jam quite so much in. That's a huge download and it's mostly because of mp3s, some of which go by so fast I never even heard the song at all.
Congrats on putting out your first game - now back to work!
It's kind of confusing with the way graphics are layered together. Constantly fading from 'hospital bed' to 'fullscreen picture of girl' makes me feel dizzy.
Finding good art is a challenge everybody faces, and the best some people can hope for is to have their art be not too distracting to prevent people from enjoying the story. Unfortunately for me, the different graphics sources and the constant shifting fades *were* too distracting. I can't remember much of anything about the game except that dizzy feeling.
I'd suggest slowing down, writing more descriptions and feelings, and not trying to jam quite so much in. That's a huge download and it's mostly because of mp3s, some of which go by so fast I never even heard the song at all.
Congrats on putting out your first game - now back to work!
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Re: My first game, Another Day
thx 4 da comment by the way, not all the songs in the game are supposed 2 play fully, if u do want to hear it all don't click.
Also i will try to edit the game transitions.
Also i will try to edit the game transitions.
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Re: My first game, Another Day
Wow, those are my favorite songs! XD
Too bad the graphics are taken from another person's...
The story is quite nice and unusual, it was fun playing. Altough sometimes I don't understand, I'm playing as the boy or as the girl? Hehe. Overall it was a fun game for me. Especially the songs.
Keep making renai games! Practice makes perfect! Yay!
Too bad the graphics are taken from another person's...
The story is quite nice and unusual, it was fun playing. Altough sometimes I don't understand, I'm playing as the boy or as the girl? Hehe. Overall it was a fun game for me. Especially the songs.
Keep making renai games! Practice makes perfect! Yay!
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Thank you very much! that made me happy. I got the images of google and i will keep making games
Also, in the game at some parts, you are the boy, others, you are the girl. Or both.
Also, in the game at some parts, you are the boy, others, you are the girl. Or both.
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Re: My first game, Another Day
Nicely done for your first game, tell me, are you planing to make more games of this type?
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I don't know...I'm very random.
I was actually thinking of makin a soundless black and white game next
I was actually thinking of makin a soundless black and white game next
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Interesting idea I like it, it is a good idea to change theme types from time to time, wouldn't want to get bored making the same game types over and over.
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...oh my god.
This is legendary shit right here. I'll try to articulate my opinions on this... later. But for now...
Holy shit. You have left me without words.
*Edit: On a serious note, I'm TOTALLY going to be cribbing some ideas from this. Specifically the use of mixed media (as it seems you've LITERALLY drew a picture of the heroine, placed it underneath your blanket and took a picture of the bed, which is actually GENIUS).
*Double Edit: Just in case. 10/10.
This is legendary shit right here. I'll try to articulate my opinions on this... later. But for now...
Holy shit. You have left me without words.
*Edit: On a serious note, I'm TOTALLY going to be cribbing some ideas from this. Specifically the use of mixed media (as it seems you've LITERALLY drew a picture of the heroine, placed it underneath your blanket and took a picture of the bed, which is actually GENIUS).
*Double Edit: Just in case. 10/10.
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Re: My first game, Another Day
You know it's illegal to use other people's copyrighted works in a game is bad, correct? .__.
Sorry to ruin the fun but it pisses me off when people do stuff like that... I mean, you could have credited. Ah well don't get mad, kay? Drama Llamas are for morons, and no one wants to be a moron :3 Just sayin'...
Sorry to ruin the fun but it pisses me off when people do stuff like that... I mean, you could have credited. Ah well don't get mad, kay? Drama Llamas are for morons, and no one wants to be a moron :3 Just sayin'...
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