I had just finished this game!
It was really fun, and I liked it very much.
Oh, but
Miru asked me to train together and asking me hanging out on sunday even after she lost her voice, does this bug already fixed, perhaps?
And jackal is such a cutiepie, definitely my favorite //////
And I had a suggestion, since you couldn't make the CG gallery, why don't you make another zip inside the game zip that compiles all those CGs, which is locked with a password, and at the end of the game(probably on the good end), you told the password? like, you put it at the end of credits or such. I really wanted to see the CG without text blocking some part of it, and I bet the other do too, so I think it's good alternative?
Edit: i saw earlier reply tell the same thing though, did you already considered it?
Edit, had another suggestion:
i always bought jackal candies, then i think, don't it would be more fun if you add an event there if you bought certain many of candies? It would be really fun, i think
oh, and you know.... i'm really sad i couldn't tell rick and luke that rin actually alive which is actually malkav though... if you ever make sequel, i hope you would make event about that... i guess you do make sequel though, there's still mysteries like who's this david guy and all
again, really loved this game and again, jackal is such a cutie and I love you make those random option like that 'marry me' option after we eat zed's cooking and again jackal is cutiepie I'm so happy you make that shota kiss cg I literally scream again he's so cute.