I had lost track of this topic, I'm sorry >< I didn't expect so many replies though, thank you!
@Selidor & LateWhiteRabbit : thank you for the advice
I think you're right, I'll follow your suggestion! And... I thought I had replied earlier to your messages but I must have forgot, I'm sorry ;__;
@YonYonYon: really? And now are you comfortable with English? Russian and English are completely different languages
@juunishi master: it sounds a lot interesting! Probably it would acquire a completely different meaning from language to language, but it would be a good challenge (though I'd be able to suggest for Italian variants instead of English ;__; even so, I know that the American Kentucky accent and the UK Scottish one are considered peculiar as English variants)
@Mammon & Carradee: I don't know if there are any, in general Italian gamers are a great minority because there's still a form of shaming people who enjoy videogames as childlish or immature; therefore, there's almost no market for games here and visual novels are almost unknown as a genre... I should find a niche, but I still haven't met anyone who played or enjoyed visual novels except for the friend who introduced me to Renpy ^^" since Italian is spoken only in Italy, Malta and a little fraction of Switzerland, and having to emerge from a worldwide crowd I thought that simply writing a VN novel wouldn't work... because I should be lucky to appeal a little niche first, otherwise my work would be completely ignored. It might me of lesser quality if I write in English, but at least I have a chance to share with others
Afterall on lemmasoft we're all from different countries, aren't we?
PS: I looked for that game; It looks like they ripped off "La Locandiera" by Goldoni, a very famous play in Venice, so they're probably Italian xD
@Evy: I know what you mean ^^" complex structures and vocabulary can't be rendered completely in English or, if they are, they would sound very cheesy... but French has means of expression that in English could be rich and interesting too