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Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust
Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 10:46 pm
by Riviera
Wow! I love it! The shading on the hair is very nice.
Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust
Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 10:52 pm
by Lumen_Astrum
Riviera wrote:Wow! I love it! The shading on the hair is very nice.
Thank you!
I worked (hard) for that~
Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust
Posted: Sun Feb 06, 2011 12:01 am
by Coren
Lucky tablet users. XD
Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust
Posted: Sun Feb 06, 2011 9:51 am
by Elenakiara
Awww!! Your drawing style is so cute! XDD <3 I can't wait to see what Leonard looks like! :O
Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust
Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2011 8:27 am
by Lumen_Astrum
Kirroha wrote:Lucky tablet users. XD
You are lucky too for having SAI. XD
Elenakiara wrote:Awww!! Your drawing style is so cute! XDD <3 I can't wait to see what Leonard looks like! :O
Thank you! : DDD
Here's a peek btw :
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He's just your initial a-bit-dazzled teen XD
I think I made him a bit too girly XD
I'm not used on drawing on the tablet that much, my hand still trembles a little x(((
Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust
Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2011 8:38 am
by night_serenade
The characters so far look gorgeous~! Can't wait to see Leonard coloured =]
And the idea for this VN is really interesting and unique; I'd like to find out more about why she doesn't seem to want to be around people or for anyone to do anything for her, and I wonder how Leonard will try to convince her otherwise.
Will definitely be looking out for updates on this one! Good luck with it!
And if you ever need someone to edit/look over/critique your script and everything, just send me a message!
Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust
Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2011 8:51 am
by Lumen_Astrum
I'm happy you took a liking to this one!
All I can say is that
her attitude is caused by a childhood event
and that
Leonard would be close to Bernadette, and he'll be a younger version of a stalker
plus to the fact that
Leonard's father is a freelance murderer (kills just because he feels like it) and he had killed almost everyone of his son's friends (mostly girls), that's why people stay away from him from the fear of getting killed.
I hope I didn't reveal too much.
Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust
Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2011 8:54 am
by night_serenade
Ooo wow, now I'm even MORE interested XD
Can't wait for more updates~ =]
Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust
Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2011 8:44 am
by Lumen_Astrum
I'm doing progress with Leonard's sprite :
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The pink thing? That is nothing : only something so I can see the blank parts correctly. I'm not using the paint bucket (because my lineart has some opened parts) because it's fun too~
I like coloring manually with my tablet XD
Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust
Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 8:51 am
by Elenakiara
Haha...
I was going to ask about the pink colors, but you explained it right under the image... xD
So yeah, he looks cool so far! :O xDD Can't wait to see what he looks like when he's 'completed'! xD
Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust
Posted: Fri Feb 11, 2011 9:18 am
by Lumen_Astrum
Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust
Posted: Fri Feb 11, 2011 10:32 am
by Elenakiara
Ohohoho! XDD Hehe, he's well drawn! :3 <3 Though I don't know if I'm just old, but he looks young!! XD Not that it's a bad thing though! :O xDD Just saying... xD
Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust
Posted: Fri Feb 11, 2011 11:01 am
by Lumen_Astrum
@Elenakiara : Thank you! I'm happy you like it~!! <3
By the way, here's a sneak peek on my progress on the main menu drawing :
I used a different method and used an inverted lineart to match Independent's slightly emotional theme.
I hope it's a good one... ^_^
A question for everybody...
Which is better as Independent's theme ,
Midnight Oil or
Tell Me Once Again?
(click the song names to listen at the song)
Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust
Posted: Fri Feb 11, 2011 2:25 pm
by Elenakiara
Tell Me Once Again
definitely struck a cord in my heart!! xDD I'd like that to be the theme song! <3
(I hid the name of the song so as not to bias any other people who will listen and decide xDD)
Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust
Posted: Tue Feb 15, 2011 5:52 am
by Lumen_Astrum
I've made the main menu screen for Independent :
I kinda abandoned the idea of doing a drawing for the title screen because it always ends up getting too messy... ^_^'''
And here's a shot of Leonard's father... XD
Sorry for the messy drawing XD
