A Mysterious Note [WIP, GXB] [Demo!]

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Re: A Mysterious Note [WIP, GXB]

#16 Post by Abeiramar » Tue Jul 12, 2011 7:37 pm

^ I'm liking the main menu so far!
The photographs are so cool :mrgreen: !
Jung is doing a weird gesture with her hands though. Is she... pinching her left hand? It suits her angry personality for sure.

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#17 Post by Death_HUG » Tue Jul 12, 2011 8:19 pm

Thank you ^-^ Actually she's crumpling a note, but I guess you really can't tell >.>; hopefully when it's colored, it'll look like she's crumpling a note.

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#18 Post by Snow Blossom » Tue Jul 12, 2011 11:55 pm

The main men looks pretty! The photographs are an innovative idea ^^
Btw I would love to help proofread :D

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Re: A Mysterious Note [WIP, GXB]

#19 Post by Kurumii » Wed Jul 13, 2011 11:31 am

>u < The story looks very interesting! I can proofread, if it's alright with you.
Occupation;; A leech part-time working leech. > n>

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Re: A Mysterious Note [WIP, GXB]

#20 Post by matheus » Wed Jul 13, 2011 4:04 pm

I liked the menu so far, I was wondering how Bora is, now is just wait to see the color of her eyes/hair.

In reading order: Park, Hiroki, Minho, Jiseung, Astor and Seunghyun. :?:
I want a Eunmi hat as birthday present. @.@

Good luck with this project ! :)


Ps: I thought she was casting a spell until I opened the image.

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#21 Post by RemnantDream » Wed Jul 13, 2011 5:09 pm

If you open the picture, you can tell she's crumpling paper. I think the main menu looks really good.

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Re: A Mysterious Note [WIP, GXB]

#22 Post by Death_HUG » Wed Jul 13, 2011 5:23 pm

@Snow Blossom
Thank you ^-^ I would love to have you as a proofreader! I'll send you a pm later :D
@Kurumii
It's alright with me! I'll send you a pm later too ^-^
@matheus
I want Eunmi's hat as a present too! Fun fact: the hat was based off a hat I saw a Korean idol wear >.<
Yep the reading order is correct!
@RemnantDream
Thank you! ^-^ I'm glad someone can see she's crumpling paper (my brother thought she was doing something else)

Tada! I finished coloring it! Yay! Now I just have to add some background later >>
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#23 Post by manga_otaku » Wed Jul 13, 2011 5:27 pm

I have a thing for foreigners - probably because I live in England when I'm Chinese xD
Mmm Astor Leroy...
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Re: A Mysterious Note [WIP, GXB]

#24 Post by Snow Blossom » Thu Jul 14, 2011 3:52 am

Wow the main menu looks really nice colored! *A*
I'm intrigued by the ribbon in Seunghyun's photo... Is that Yoonmi?

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Re: A Mysterious Note [WIP, GXB]

#25 Post by Death_HUG » Thu Jul 14, 2011 10:46 am

@manga_otaku
I have a thing for foreigners too! ^-^ I'm glad you like Astor :D
@Snow Blossom
Thank you ^^ and yep, that's Yoonmi!

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#26 Post by RemnantDream » Thu Jul 14, 2011 11:02 am

It looks even better colored. Jiseung looks so cutee ^^

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Re: A Mysterious Note [WIP, GXB]

#27 Post by YuukiCrossPudding » Thu Jul 14, 2011 11:27 am

Ahh the main menu is so pretty *A*
sorry I didn't see she actually crumpling a paper, since the skin and the paper color almost same orz
I hope this will be finished! good luck!
If you need any help just ask xD and lurks around here >v> or there <v<
or up there ^_^ or down here u.u
(okay I'm stupid so.. OTL x3)

*A*I'm aiming for Hiroki or Jiseung <3

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really?! *v* then same here~ I'm chinese (by blood lol) but born and raised in indonesia
I have a BIG affection for foreigners..why though?? that's a mystery

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Re: A Mysterious Note [WIP, GXB]

#28 Post by manga_otaku » Thu Jul 14, 2011 11:53 am

@ SnowBlossom I think I'm attracted to foreigners because of the difference in our looks. *slaps self*
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Re: A Mysterious Note [WIP, GXB]

#29 Post by Death_HUG » Thu Jul 14, 2011 5:00 pm

@RemnantDream
Thank you ^-^ and Jiseung will be so happy(?) to hear that he looks cute lol >.<

@YuukiCrossPudding
haha it's okay if you didn't see she was crumpling a paper^^ Thank you and when I need help with anything else, I'll ask you first XD (you're not stupid...man, just looking at your username makes me want to read vampire knight and eat som pudding >.>)

@manga_otaku
Don't you mean YuukiCrossPudding?
I'm attracted to foreigners because I find thier accents attractive... >.>

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Re: A Mysterious Note [WIP, GXB]

#30 Post by manga_otaku » Thu Jul 14, 2011 5:13 pm

@ Death_HUG - ah yes. YuukiCrossPudding, not SnowBlossom. I think I made a mistake because I read somewhere that AnowBlossom was chinese too xD MIX UP! SORRY!
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